for Geist12/17/2008 c4 
5random-name-change
wow i was being stupid. i must be really tired tonight. I like this story. its so unique. if you get a chance, id like to see what you think of some of my stories.
5random-name-changewow i was being stupid. i must be really tired tonight. I like this story. its so unique. if you get a chance, id like to see what you think of some of my stories.
12/17/2008 c3 random-name-change
Ch. 3 and 5 are together? is that intentional or am i missing something here?
Ch. 3 and 5 are together? is that intentional or am i missing something here?
12/16/2008 c1 random-name-change
Very interesting so far. Definately not like anything else I've ever read. This is all I had time for tonight, but I'm very much hoping to read the rest this week. Excellent first chapter and names. And thanks again for your review of Twilight.
Very interesting so far. Definately not like anything else I've ever read. This is all I had time for tonight, but I'm very much hoping to read the rest this week. Excellent first chapter and names. And thanks again for your review of Twilight.
12/14/2008 c1 18Aoide Mnemosyne
Great chapter :). I did spot one spelling error, however. 'Peak' should be 'Peek'. That's it though.
I like Shamm very much, especially her sarcasm. I look forward to reading more of this story! (not right now unfortunately, supper calls ^-^)
~Sophia
18Aoide MnemosyneGreat chapter :). I did spot one spelling error, however. 'Peak' should be 'Peek'. That's it though.
I like Shamm very much, especially her sarcasm. I look forward to reading more of this story! (not right now unfortunately, supper calls ^-^)
~Sophia
12/10/2008 c3 2Valeria Astoreth
I was very, very entertained by all three chapters, even the short and not really important one. Please continue!
2Valeria AstorethI was very, very entertained by all three chapters, even the short and not really important one. Please continue!