for The Moonlilly Ball12/19/2012 c1 Emily's Mom
You are a talented writer. If you commit to writing every day and never never falter or give up, and you keep writing every day, who knows what will pour forth from your soul?
You are a talented writer. If you commit to writing every day and never never falter or give up, and you keep writing every day, who knows what will pour forth from your soul?
12/14/2008 c1 
2ArtisticGeist
That's gorgeous, love =)
May I suggest more commas though? Not that there are any placed incorrectly, it just adds flair to the poem when there are commas at the end of each line. Very descriptive poem though, your choice of vocabulary is lovely.
~*ArtisticGeist*~
2ArtisticGeistThat's gorgeous, love =)
May I suggest more commas though? Not that there are any placed incorrectly, it just adds flair to the poem when there are commas at the end of each line. Very descriptive poem though, your choice of vocabulary is lovely.
~*ArtisticGeist*~