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1/26/2010 c1 82steffxnie
This is really good. I like the idea and the meaning behind it. Very true. Good work! :D
8/6/2009 c1 1tonight we bloom
This is really good, I enjoyed reading it. The bold letters left me a bit confused though. Do they spell out something?

I would love opinions from a writer like you on my work, it would mean a lot!
12/13/2008 c1 128vitriolicvermilion
Ever delicious. I love your poetry, especially when it's personal, and this was the most amazingly rad metaphor ever.

I like the use of the bold letters to spell it out.

Cos people that haven't read your stuff before might not get it.

Wonderful! (:
12/11/2008 c1 81Princess-anna57
"the rest of the garden" - is only six syllables, not seven.

But I really like this piece! I enjoy writing poems in haiku forms too. :) Great job. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^
12/11/2008 c1 4Couronne de laurier
This is brilliant. :) I really really liked it.

What's the significance of the bold letters? I liked how they kept the beat going visually. (I must sound like such a geek)

Haha. Anyway, well done. :)

I'm off to check more of your stuff.
12/11/2008 c1 1Ganondorf The Dark Knight
I loved it. :]

And flowers are my favorite subject.

Haha. Great job.

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