for Addie and Tria2/7/2009 c5 i-see-faeries
I love this. So cute and random. Had me going in the first chapter. I was ready to abort. Haha. Personally, I like Addison better. No idea why, just do. Anyways, nicely done. Much love and adoration.
I love this. So cute and random. Had me going in the first chapter. I was ready to abort. Haha. Personally, I like Addison better. No idea why, just do. Anyways, nicely done. Much love and adoration.
2/7/2009 c5 
4Blo0d StaiNed Rose
That was...amazing..loved it seriously..i love these guys..btw there is no need to thank me..i shall thank you...you just made my day bearable...:D cant wait for more..there will be more i hope :)
4Blo0d StaiNed RoseThat was...amazing..loved it seriously..i love these guys..btw there is no need to thank me..i shall thank you...you just made my day bearable...:D cant wait for more..there will be more i hope :)
2/6/2009 c5 DefineNightmare
It was actually quite a cute kiss scene- the fact that you included the dark shadow in Addison gave it some...tang! xD Tria is also adorable for being a mini-hero.
update sooN
It was actually quite a cute kiss scene- the fact that you included the dark shadow in Addison gave it some...tang! xD Tria is also adorable for being a mini-hero.
update sooN
2/6/2009 c5 12Ryette
Oh! Lunchables! I love those things. They're amazing and tasty and disgusting all at once. I got the pizza ones one time and they came with this cheese powder to make it taste maxxed out or whatever they call it and it was awful. But I love those things all the same. Tria's response to the Lunchables reminds me of my friends' reactions when I bring them to eat.
I really liked the way this turned out. It wasn't too sudden. Nice job.
And as for your random question...I can't choose between them. I really can't. You've never given me reason to like one more than the other...Maybe Tria? Hard to tell. They both rock.
Keep it up :)
-Ryette
12RyetteOh! Lunchables! I love those things. They're amazing and tasty and disgusting all at once. I got the pizza ones one time and they came with this cheese powder to make it taste maxxed out or whatever they call it and it was awful. But I love those things all the same. Tria's response to the Lunchables reminds me of my friends' reactions when I bring them to eat.
I really liked the way this turned out. It wasn't too sudden. Nice job.
And as for your random question...I can't choose between them. I really can't. You've never given me reason to like one more than the other...Maybe Tria? Hard to tell. They both rock.
Keep it up :)
-Ryette
2/1/2009 c4 Ryette
Yay! Update! I realized that I didn't have you on a story alert, so it's a good thing I checked my favorites or else I might not have ever seen this.
Yeah.
I really liked this drabble as well, something about their interaction made me smile. Their personalities are so likeable. Can't wait to read the skate park drabble :) Hopefully it'll come soon! -insert heavy hinting here-
I'd be an awful beta, sorry. I'm a grammar nut, but that's about all I'm good for and I'm really busy...But seriously? I don't think you need a beta...
Yup yup. Update!
-Ryette
Yay! Update! I realized that I didn't have you on a story alert, so it's a good thing I checked my favorites or else I might not have ever seen this.
Yeah.
I really liked this drabble as well, something about their interaction made me smile. Their personalities are so likeable. Can't wait to read the skate park drabble :) Hopefully it'll come soon! -insert heavy hinting here-
I'd be an awful beta, sorry. I'm a grammar nut, but that's about all I'm good for and I'm really busy...But seriously? I don't think you need a beta...
Yup yup. Update!
-Ryette
2/1/2009 c4 4Blo0d StaiNed Rose
That was so cute...:) Cant wait for more..
I would have offered myself for beta for the offer is too tempting but you see my beta skills are...lets just say not the best thing around...:) Hope you find one btw..:)
4Blo0d StaiNed RoseThat was so cute...:) Cant wait for more..
I would have offered myself for beta for the offer is too tempting but you see my beta skills are...lets just say not the best thing around...:) Hope you find one btw..:)
1/31/2009 c4 Siese
Cute! I'm really falling for these boys. Keep up the great work, and as usual, I'll be waiting for your next update.
Siese
Cute! I'm really falling for these boys. Keep up the great work, and as usual, I'll be waiting for your next update.
Siese
1/31/2009 c4 DefineNightmare
So far the couple is very interesting, but for some reason my soft spot goes to Addison. Probably because the first chapter xD
update sooN!
So far the couple is very interesting, but for some reason my soft spot goes to Addison. Probably because the first chapter xD
update sooN!
1/25/2009 c3 12Ryette
I loved this. The first chapter was so emotional, and I could really feel the relationship between Addie and Tria...And I can't wait to read the first time that they actually meet. But I see that you have this as "completed"? Are you doing a separate story?
Heh. Well. Awesome work :)
-Ryette
12RyetteI loved this. The first chapter was so emotional, and I could really feel the relationship between Addie and Tria...And I can't wait to read the first time that they actually meet. But I see that you have this as "completed"? Are you doing a separate story?
Heh. Well. Awesome work :)
-Ryette
1/23/2009 c3 Siese
I liked this chapter, as well (of course). I think Tria is my favorite of the two. I've always been a sucker for the bad boy persona. I'm very excited about reading when they actually meet!
Keep up the awesome work!
Siese
I liked this chapter, as well (of course). I think Tria is my favorite of the two. I've always been a sucker for the bad boy persona. I'm very excited about reading when they actually meet!
Keep up the awesome work!
Siese
1/23/2009 c3 4Blo0d StaiNed Rose
oh i so love these boys pls hurry and write them together again...:) pls pls pls :)
4Blo0d StaiNed Roseoh i so love these boys pls hurry and write them together again...:) pls pls pls :)
1/22/2009 c2 Siese
This was cute! I can't wait to read Tria's first impression of Addie.
As for the title suggestion...I always suck at those. Though personally, "Addie and Tria" sounds fine to me the way it is. Simple but complex, if you know what I mean.
Anyway. I'll be waiting for your next update, and you can expect to hear from me again. ^_^
Siese
This was cute! I can't wait to read Tria's first impression of Addie.
As for the title suggestion...I always suck at those. Though personally, "Addie and Tria" sounds fine to me the way it is. Simple but complex, if you know what I mean.
Anyway. I'll be waiting for your next update, and you can expect to hear from me again. ^_^
Siese
1/3/2009 c1 Blo0d StaiNed Rose
i love this story...at the end it almost made me cry and for me it is a big deal...i would really like if you write something more...maybe if they stay together how Addison will tell everyone about him being in a relation with Tria...:) i would really like to read that..but also about their first kiss...excellent job :)
i love this story...at the end it almost made me cry and for me it is a big deal...i would really like if you write something more...maybe if they stay together how Addison will tell everyone about him being in a relation with Tria...:) i would really like to read that..but also about their first kiss...excellent job :)