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1/1/2010 c19 1Jamie-Mercer
I was way close to tears reading this but when I first read the chapter where the chick was killing the vamp I kinda thought it was Jeremy at first...Aw poor Andre & Damian!
1/1/2010 c19 2XxSCENEandHEARDxX
Great chappie! I can't wait for the next one! ^_^
12/31/2009 c1 Jasmin
I like the plot so far, you have good ideas but not a good way of interpreting them into text. for example your writing isnt that structured, "She got in the car, started the car,..." and also "I got in the shower. I got out of the shower." you're very good at developing the characters though, i can really understand their personalities.
12/26/2009 c18 2Lunary Canary
O_o isnt he one of Jeremy's friends? NUU!
12/26/2009 c17 Lunary Canary
yay :) hes concerned for her sake
12/26/2009 c17 2XxSCENEandHEARDxX
great chappie! Please update soon!
8/9/2009 c17 A-Cup-Of-Air
Loved it! Again...:)What do you have with the name Demetri? You had it in you other story too. Hihii, but I like it.

I think I like Demetri even more than Jeremy... he's like really the "bad guy" type. But probably Alex and Jeremy are ment to be together. Ofcourse, Jeremy is super too:D

I would like to know more about Tess, she's so quiet and shy...

If you would like my help with what to do next, then email me:D I would be happy to help.

You shouldn't apologize so much. Your stories are fantastic!

EVERYBODY WHO IS READING THIS: READ KATIE'S OTHER STORY! I think it's even more brilliant.

It was so sweet, that you emailed me, after I reviewed your story. Thanks :D

I'm waiting for the next chapter! I hope to see a little more Alex-Jeremy...thing, if you don't mind :)

Sorry for MY grammar mistakes...
7/28/2009 c17 peacelovesun
damien is acting like an idiot cause seriously why the hell would she help someone that severely injured her arm. that's dumb! aww though with jeremy and alex. lol. update again soon

-Katie-
7/28/2009 c17 CrazyInAGoodWay
love it! POST MORE SOON!
7/27/2009 c1 atl.wtk
wow. i really like this story so far! pleasee keep on writing. cant wait to read more!
7/26/2009 c2 Coyfluix
I forgot to ask this in the 1st chapter. Why did she want to know the full names of all the guys? How come alex and jeremy's family members aren't vampires, or rather don't seem to be?
7/26/2009 c1 Coyfluix
So wait... Is Jeremy a vampire or a person who protects people from vampires? Is Alex or whatever her name is, a vampire or she human? Why did she glare at jeremy's friends at lunch? How is he so sure that she's a vampire? Besides the looks and the character traits.
7/19/2009 c1 5xxchristiexx
Okay, so I just found your story but so far I am enjoying it a lot. I love those connection types between normal people and the supernatural world. What is it with vampires that make your heart melt and want to read more? =D Good job and I look forward to reading more once you've had a chance to write it.
7/19/2009 c14 2GraceElaganceandBeauty
i was reading your writers block and i think yo should have alex prove her loyalty to the coven and reveal a little more about her grandfather / and or her dad
6/16/2009 c16 6light.and.darkness.angel
hmm i just started reading it, i like it! pleassee update soon!
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