for To Feel the Sun6/6/2010 c13 bananaaa
you are my idol! well, maybe not but you write a damn good story...(you're probably gonna make me fail my history essay)
I just found a small error and thought maybe you'll want to change it?
Simon (isn't it supposed to be Carlin?) put his bowl to the side, and grabbed his spatula. "It's a sad fact. It's a part of the dating game. Hell, it's a part of life." - Chap 13
gotta keep reading...
:P
Because
I
Like
Pie
you are my idol! well, maybe not but you write a damn good story...(you're probably gonna make me fail my history essay)
I just found a small error and thought maybe you'll want to change it?
Simon (isn't it supposed to be Carlin?) put his bowl to the side, and grabbed his spatula. "It's a sad fact. It's a part of the dating game. Hell, it's a part of life." - Chap 13
gotta keep reading...
:P
Because
I
Like
Pie
6/3/2010 c14 jekodama
You know, at the beginning I loved everybody. Then I started loving Jonah more than everyone else. Now I pretty much hate everyone except Jonah, Grace and her parents. I wonder if I'll start hating them soon...
You know, at the beginning I loved everybody. Then I started loving Jonah more than everyone else. Now I pretty much hate everyone except Jonah, Grace and her parents. I wonder if I'll start hating them soon...
6/1/2010 c19 
1JustWords
0_0 -_- 0_0... thats a blinky face :P i had to scream into my pillow at the last sentence, a AWESOME ending, but leaving you hanging for more :D i think i saw a sequel up, so i'm off to stay up till the 'wee' hours of the morning to see what its about xD
cheers!
1JustWords0_0 -_- 0_0... thats a blinky face :P i had to scream into my pillow at the last sentence, a AWESOME ending, but leaving you hanging for more :D i think i saw a sequel up, so i'm off to stay up till the 'wee' hours of the morning to see what its about xD
cheers!
5/27/2010 c19 brownchristine8
I've spent the whole day reading this, and I can't remember the last time I've enjoyed a day so much. Thank you for sharing this with me.
I've spent the whole day reading this, and I can't remember the last time I've enjoyed a day so much. Thank you for sharing this with me.
5/27/2010 c20 swords dragons and diet coke
just thought i'd tell you that you're an amzing writer! i love the characterization of gracie and tje twists & turns of the story! I can't wait to check out the sequel!
just thought i'd tell you that you're an amzing writer! i love the characterization of gracie and tje twists & turns of the story! I can't wait to check out the sequel!
5/27/2010 c14 brownchristine8
Oh, my God.
I love it.
Thank you. I can't tell you how refreshing it is to find an author with such a firm grasp of what real love is.
So that's it. Thank you.
Oh, my God.
I love it.
Thank you. I can't tell you how refreshing it is to find an author with such a firm grasp of what real love is.
So that's it. Thank you.
5/27/2010 c9 brownchristine8
I normally don't review until I've read all available chapters, but I can't help it. I love Jonah! I want him to win.
That is all.
I normally don't review until I've read all available chapters, but I can't help it. I love Jonah! I want him to win.
That is all.
5/24/2010 c1 eiyuang999
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5/8/2010 c19 4slee5133
love it! though i would have liked more jonah/grace interaction after their declarations of love. :P
4slee5133love it! though i would have liked more jonah/grace interaction after their declarations of love. :P
5/2/2010 c19 1lecabe
i loved this story. with a passion. marry me please?
okay no actually i'm not a lesbian, so that would not work out, but still. this was AMAZING.
some key things:
the "i less than three geeks" t-shirt was hilarious.
in the chapter 14 note, you used the word "y'all", adding to the random kinship i felt with you
your favorite movie is the princess bride. which is MY favorite movie. so...yes. just...yes.
i adored the phantom of the opera and Wicked references (if only you could witness my "ooh" when you classified Sarah as a 'Galinda'. it instantly cleared things up). and i was literally about to watch Les Miserables for the first time before i got distracted by fictionpress. its sitting not 10 feet away from me, laughing at me. i had a spaz attack. just saying.
you are perfectly amazing.
soli Deo gloria! (i googled it...)
1lecabei loved this story. with a passion. marry me please?
okay no actually i'm not a lesbian, so that would not work out, but still. this was AMAZING.
some key things:
the "i less than three geeks" t-shirt was hilarious.
in the chapter 14 note, you used the word "y'all", adding to the random kinship i felt with you
your favorite movie is the princess bride. which is MY favorite movie. so...yes. just...yes.
i adored the phantom of the opera and Wicked references (if only you could witness my "ooh" when you classified Sarah as a 'Galinda'. it instantly cleared things up). and i was literally about to watch Les Miserables for the first time before i got distracted by fictionpress. its sitting not 10 feet away from me, laughing at me. i had a spaz attack. just saying.
you are perfectly amazing.
soli Deo gloria! (i googled it...)
4/24/2010 c19 Tessa
Wow. I think I just had a heart attack when I read that they had gotten married. Anyways, just wanted to review to tell you that I am in total awe of your amazing writing powers and that I totally can't wait until i find one of your stories in a bookstore somewhere and go, "OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! I READ THAT!" in a much too loud voice.
Wow. I think I just had a heart attack when I read that they had gotten married. Anyways, just wanted to review to tell you that I am in total awe of your amazing writing powers and that I totally can't wait until i find one of your stories in a bookstore somewhere and go, "OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! I READ THAT!" in a much too loud voice.
4/13/2010 c20 lovenista
HOLY HELL. I just finished your story in the span of two days and I friggin' LOVED it. It made me laugh, cry and everything in between. Jonah is so cute:D I'm glad that you made the two end up together. I wasn't very fond of Simon. Anyways, I really enjoy your story. You are quite a good writer.
HOLY HELL. I just finished your story in the span of two days and I friggin' LOVED it. It made me laugh, cry and everything in between. Jonah is so cute:D I'm glad that you made the two end up together. I wasn't very fond of Simon. Anyways, I really enjoy your story. You are quite a good writer.
4/10/2010 c20 SlugHunter
NAW its wonderful *sniffles*
its so cute and sweet and lovely :D
hmm in the part where Gracie goes over to despicable-cheating-lowlife-who must not be named, and they're cooking... i think you accidentally called him simon ...
but anyways i loved it :D awesome awesome awesome! ^_^
NAW its wonderful *sniffles*
its so cute and sweet and lovely :D
hmm in the part where Gracie goes over to despicable-cheating-lowlife-who must not be named, and they're cooking... i think you accidentally called him simon ...
but anyways i loved it :D awesome awesome awesome! ^_^