for To Feel the Sun4/7/2010 c19 xjo orange
This story is absolutely adorable! I can't believe Sarah would do that to Grace, but I'm glad it all ended well.
This story is absolutely adorable! I can't believe Sarah would do that to Grace, but I'm glad it all ended well.
3/28/2010 c20 
1dancinequestrian
This was such a great story! I absolutely love it! Great work! Oh, and I loved the little Broadway tidbits in there (I'm Broadway-obsessed.) LOL ;)
1dancinequestrianThis was such a great story! I absolutely love it! Great work! Oh, and I loved the little Broadway tidbits in there (I'm Broadway-obsessed.) LOL ;)
3/28/2010 c20 8maiff
I don't know if I have expressed my fondness to this story when I first read it. Since I can't help but tell you that I super like this story. At first, I liked Simon. He's cute, a bit childish. But as the story progressed, I lost touch to his cuteness and found the inner asshole that he is.
Also, I like (love) Jonah. *swoon* He's Irish, for crying out loud. :3 He's a lawyer and a gentleman. Plus, he's sexy :PP *squeal squeal* [Please let the squealing do the rest of the explanation, since I obviously express my delight in squeals]
Anyway, I'm so glad that Gracie and Jonah got together. :3 They're like perfect for each other. So, there, I'll be reading the sequel. You'd probably see my pen name again. c:
! *squeal*
8maiffI don't know if I have expressed my fondness to this story when I first read it. Since I can't help but tell you that I super like this story. At first, I liked Simon. He's cute, a bit childish. But as the story progressed, I lost touch to his cuteness and found the inner asshole that he is.
Also, I like (love) Jonah. *swoon* He's Irish, for crying out loud. :3 He's a lawyer and a gentleman. Plus, he's sexy :PP *squeal squeal* [Please let the squealing do the rest of the explanation, since I obviously express my delight in squeals]
Anyway, I'm so glad that Gracie and Jonah got together. :3 They're like perfect for each other. So, there, I'll be reading the sequel. You'd probably see my pen name again. c:
! *squeal*
3/20/2010 c19 3Quixoticisms
OH MY GOODNESS.
I LOVELOVELOVE THIS.(And Jonah, too!)
(It's two-thirty am and I'm woozy and half-asleep but I just had to finish this because it was so heartaching-ly perfect!)
I know reviews are for constructive criticism and you've actually already finished this, but I just wanted to say how much I loved your story!
3QuixoticismsOH MY GOODNESS.
I LOVELOVELOVE THIS.(And Jonah, too!)
(It's two-thirty am and I'm woozy and half-asleep but I just had to finish this because it was so heartaching-ly perfect!)
I know reviews are for constructive criticism and you've actually already finished this, but I just wanted to say how much I loved your story!
2/25/2010 c19 2JenRad11
Awesome story, I really enjoyed it! There are getting to be fewer stories on FP that I actually like and this on I loved. (Although I started reading the sequel and I hate how the last updated chapter is them fighting!) But this one's great!
2JenRad11Awesome story, I really enjoyed it! There are getting to be fewer stories on FP that I actually like and this on I loved. (Although I started reading the sequel and I hate how the last updated chapter is them fighting!) But this one's great!
2/22/2010 c19 2jessie0754
That was lovely :) And isn't it sweet that Jonah was the only one who never got them mixed up? I think that was when I realised that Simon was not going to get the girl. And boy am I glad about that!
Thank you for the wonderful story!
2jessie0754That was lovely :) And isn't it sweet that Jonah was the only one who never got them mixed up? I think that was when I realised that Simon was not going to get the girl. And boy am I glad about that!
Thank you for the wonderful story!
2/21/2010 c19 4anitsirK
That was absolutely fantastic! :D I LOVE IT! The characters are so original. They're really dynamic, unlike most characters here on FP. How's studying Psychology going for you? Is it fun? Hahaha...I'm asking 'cause I'm contemplating taking it up for college too. :D Thanks for this wonderful gift!
4anitsirKThat was absolutely fantastic! :D I LOVE IT! The characters are so original. They're really dynamic, unlike most characters here on FP. How's studying Psychology going for you? Is it fun? Hahaha...I'm asking 'cause I'm contemplating taking it up for college too. :D Thanks for this wonderful gift!
2/10/2010 c19 Someone
Oh my goodness! I loved this story. The epilogue was perfect. A truly worthwhile story!
Oh my goodness! I loved this story. The epilogue was perfect. A truly worthwhile story!
2/5/2010 c19 Thundaga.blitz
I totally love this story! I found out about on A Drop Of ! XD
I can't wait to read more of your stories. :)
I totally love this story! I found out about on A Drop Of ! XD
I can't wait to read more of your stories. :)
2/3/2010 c19 24Ravina
I absolutely LOVED this story! There's always something about calm and composed hot guys that pulls me in...so I was definitely rooting for Jonah from the beginning.
Great ending as well - you ended it on a very jolly note, what with the prostitute song...and using 'my wife' as the final words was very effective.
Just thought you should know that I spent a lot of the night reading this...until my godmother yelled and literally waited for me to turn off the computer and climb into bed...but the damage was done and I was a pain to deal with at work today. So yeah, your fault.
Looking forward to reading more from you!
- Rebekah
24RavinaI absolutely LOVED this story! There's always something about calm and composed hot guys that pulls me in...so I was definitely rooting for Jonah from the beginning.
Great ending as well - you ended it on a very jolly note, what with the prostitute song...and using 'my wife' as the final words was very effective.
Just thought you should know that I spent a lot of the night reading this...until my godmother yelled and literally waited for me to turn off the computer and climb into bed...but the damage was done and I was a pain to deal with at work today. So yeah, your fault.
Looking forward to reading more from you!
- Rebekah
1/27/2010 c19 1HeartsOfDiamonds
Great story. I think Simon's character was a bit rush since he just disappeared even though he was quite attached to Grace.
1HeartsOfDiamondsGreat story. I think Simon's character was a bit rush since he just disappeared even though he was quite attached to Grace.