for To Feel the Sun7/2/2009 c14 frecklemaggie
That declaration of love was awesome, AWESOME, AWESOME! I just read this story all the way through and I have to say I like it very much. The whole plot is wonderful...I love that you took a kinda popular story premise (girl loving boy who doesn't love her back) and twisted it into something original and gripping.
And I LOVE JONAS! I knew he couldn't be totally awesome for no reason. Keep up the amazing writing, please! I can't wait for the next update!
That declaration of love was awesome, AWESOME, AWESOME! I just read this story all the way through and I have to say I like it very much. The whole plot is wonderful...I love that you took a kinda popular story premise (girl loving boy who doesn't love her back) and twisted it into something original and gripping.
And I LOVE JONAS! I knew he couldn't be totally awesome for no reason. Keep up the amazing writing, please! I can't wait for the next update!
7/2/2009 c15 
13Laugh With Rage
At least Cassie and Jonah are still there for her...and maybe Danielle. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
13Laugh With RageAt least Cassie and Jonah are still there for her...and maybe Danielle. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
7/2/2009 c15 3palmsaresweaty
I like this story. Its been awhile since there has been some substance on fp. I just got the "i less than three geeks shirt" lol...this is what happens when you spend too much time with calc and eng boys:D
3palmsaresweatyI like this story. Its been awhile since there has been some substance on fp. I just got the "i less than three geeks shirt" lol...this is what happens when you spend too much time with calc and eng boys:D
7/2/2009 c15 Alexandra Paige
Haha I totally just got the "I less than three geeks" shirt! cute.
I liked this chapter. The ending was perfecto! :)
Update soon! and I'm glad your feeling better.
-Alex
Haha I totally just got the "I less than three geeks" shirt! cute.
I liked this chapter. The ending was perfecto! :)
Update soon! and I'm glad your feeling better.
-Alex
7/2/2009 c1 Counting Petals
This was so effortlessly funny. I loved it. I especially liked the last line - that was genius.
Overall, good start. I can't wait to read more!
-Steph
This was so effortlessly funny. I loved it. I especially liked the last line - that was genius.
Overall, good start. I can't wait to read more!
-Steph
7/2/2009 c15 1breakinglove
I want to be your 100th reviewer. This is an uh-mazing story. You have seriuos writing skills.
Love this story.
1breakingloveI want to be your 100th reviewer. This is an uh-mazing story. You have seriuos writing skills.
Love this story.
7/2/2009 c15 MarloCarlo10
Aw man Danielle and Cassie are true friends, well maybe not Danielle, but at least she believed her :)
Good ending to the chapter :)
Is "I" supossed to be the roman numeral for one? Thats the only thing I could think of...Although it doesn't make much sense to me. ;)
Aw man Danielle and Cassie are true friends, well maybe not Danielle, but at least she believed her :)
Good ending to the chapter :)
Is "I" supossed to be the roman numeral for one? Thats the only thing I could think of...Although it doesn't make much sense to me. ;)
7/2/2009 c15 Oboe Jenkins
Thank you for writing. I just like to spaz when i'm bored. I really do love this though.
Thank you for writing. I just like to spaz when i'm bored. I really do love this though.
7/2/2009 c15 7Faithfully Yours
Yes. I feel like all is right with your literary world. =) I mean, sure, everything is still seriously screwed up for Gracie, but at least Danielle knows and she's probably the most important one! I mean, Sarah's just being a whiny brat who is getting on my every last nerve... Anyway, I'm excited for the next chapter too! I'm so glad you have it written. =)
7Faithfully YoursYes. I feel like all is right with your literary world. =) I mean, sure, everything is still seriously screwed up for Gracie, but at least Danielle knows and she's probably the most important one! I mean, Sarah's just being a whiny brat who is getting on my every last nerve... Anyway, I'm excited for the next chapter too! I'm so glad you have it written. =)
7/2/2009 c15 3kat6528
I'm glad that your story adds some facebook on it. Everyone has a facebook now. I liked how you used this chapter to really get Jonah's background. Danielle already had her suspicions of Carlin's infidelity, so it doesn't surprise me that she chose to believe Grace. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter!
3kat6528I'm glad that your story adds some facebook on it. Everyone has a facebook now. I liked how you used this chapter to really get Jonah's background. Danielle already had her suspicions of Carlin's infidelity, so it doesn't surprise me that she chose to believe Grace. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter!
7/2/2009 c15 earlkgm
ah. loved it, although it was kind of a filler. glad that Danielle's not mad at her (at least that's what I'm getting) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
ah. loved it, although it was kind of a filler. glad that Danielle's not mad at her (at least that's what I'm getting) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
7/2/2009 c15 4under the influence
yay...angsty...
The shirt is awesome! I have a piece of flair on facebook that says 'you know, i less than 3 you'...
I picked up a couple of grammatical things...but I'm too lazy to go back and try to find them now...
4under the influenceyay...angsty...
The shirt is awesome! I have a piece of flair on facebook that says 'you know, i less than 3 you'...
I picked up a couple of grammatical things...but I'm too lazy to go back and try to find them now...
7/2/2009 c14 Person
ur story is so unbelievably awesome and interesting that i have to warn u that people might try to plagarize it this isb GraceEleganceandBeauty not logged in
ur story is so unbelievably awesome and interesting that i have to warn u that people might try to plagarize it this isb GraceEleganceandBeauty not logged in
7/2/2009 c14 1PredictablyMe
Okay, so, to put it basically, this story has made me so excited I had to sneak back onto my computer at one in the morning to get to chapter 14. And.. it made me CRY!
Please, please, please, tell me she at least doesn't go back to Simon after all of this! Jonah is the one!
gah... I knew it all along. He's too awesome not to be... and then her book is going to go famous I know it. And it won't matter that everyone was disappointed because she'll make something out of herself on her own terms, just like she's been doing all of this time.
What can I say, I only have love for this story and simply can NOT wait till the next update.
1PredictablyMeOkay, so, to put it basically, this story has made me so excited I had to sneak back onto my computer at one in the morning to get to chapter 14. And.. it made me CRY!
Please, please, please, tell me she at least doesn't go back to Simon after all of this! Jonah is the one!
gah... I knew it all along. He's too awesome not to be... and then her book is going to go famous I know it. And it won't matter that everyone was disappointed because she'll make something out of herself on her own terms, just like she's been doing all of this time.
What can I say, I only have love for this story and simply can NOT wait till the next update.