for To Feel the Sun7/1/2009 c14 
7Faithfully Yours
Aw, it's so sweet. So heartwrenchingly, adorably, wonderfully sweet. And really, really good. Like, I wish I had it in a book so I didn't have to wait to read the rest of it. =)
7Faithfully YoursAw, it's so sweet. So heartwrenchingly, adorably, wonderfully sweet. And really, really good. Like, I wish I had it in a book so I didn't have to wait to read the rest of it. =)
7/1/2009 c14 notquitewitty
Wow. I don't think I've ever been so impressed by something so cheesy. Jonah was really corny here, but it just fit with the moment so well. I just wish Gracie had a little more backbone. She mentions something at the very end about Sarah forgiving her when she really did nothing wrong. All she did was accidentally say something that Sarah should have already said herself ages ago. Sarah keeps being a demanding, self-centered witch, and Gracie keeps letting it go. It's driving me up the wall, and I'm really hoping that Gracie's not going to let it go so easily this time. Still, next to Sarah, Gracie is so much more lovable, and I kind of admire her for still being herself even though it's clearly hard with such a spotlight-stealing sibling.
Anyways, this chapter was great. Yeah, it was sappy, but it really brought out my inner romantic so that I was clutching my laptop and eating every line up. Great job on writing this. I hadn't heard of your stories before, and suddenly I heard about this one twice in a day. I can't wait to read more of your work!
Wow. I don't think I've ever been so impressed by something so cheesy. Jonah was really corny here, but it just fit with the moment so well. I just wish Gracie had a little more backbone. She mentions something at the very end about Sarah forgiving her when she really did nothing wrong. All she did was accidentally say something that Sarah should have already said herself ages ago. Sarah keeps being a demanding, self-centered witch, and Gracie keeps letting it go. It's driving me up the wall, and I'm really hoping that Gracie's not going to let it go so easily this time. Still, next to Sarah, Gracie is so much more lovable, and I kind of admire her for still being herself even though it's clearly hard with such a spotlight-stealing sibling.
Anyways, this chapter was great. Yeah, it was sappy, but it really brought out my inner romantic so that I was clutching my laptop and eating every line up. Great job on writing this. I hadn't heard of your stories before, and suddenly I heard about this one twice in a day. I can't wait to read more of your work!
7/1/2009 c14 MarloCarlo10
OH MY GOOD GOLLY GOODNESS! That was one of the most fucking adorable and sweetest lines I have EVER! read. Like tearing up that was so fucking cute! Ah my goodness...so sweet and cute!
I loved Jonah before, since he was so cute and tense, but now, I love him so much more! My favorite character now!
Damn I cannot believe that her own sister would not believe her!
GREAT CHAPTER! sorry about the cursing, but when I'm emotional I cuss, and thats how much I loved those lines.
^_^
OH MY GOOD GOLLY GOODNESS! That was one of the most fucking adorable and sweetest lines I have EVER! read. Like tearing up that was so fucking cute! Ah my goodness...so sweet and cute!
I loved Jonah before, since he was so cute and tense, but now, I love him so much more! My favorite character now!
Damn I cannot believe that her own sister would not believe her!
GREAT CHAPTER! sorry about the cursing, but when I'm emotional I cuss, and thats how much I loved those lines.
^_^
7/1/2009 c14 2Minty F
Oh goodness, it's so wonderful to come back from vacation to all of these new chapters! Especially now that the story is getting all intense... I'm literally shivering with excitement.
So, I pretty much dislike everyone in the story right now except for Gracie, Jonah, and Cassie.
Carlin's true nature really surprised me. I should have seen it coming - I mean, there was something odd about that guy. I knew there had to be a character defect in there somewhere. But I didn't know it was THAT bad. Geez. I'm glad Gracie didn't end up with him.
Simon and Sarah make me angry. I'm not a huge fan of people that are narrow-minded and are quick to jump to conclusions. Both of them are acting so immature and ignorant. Really, Gracie has a heart of gold. She would never do that to Danielle. At least her own twin should know that. *shakes head*
Okay, I'll admit it: I squealed like a love-struck piglet when I read the scene between Jonah and Gracie. Could the man GET any sweeter? And that line - “I think I've loved you since you came into work three years ago and bugged me for two months until I gave in and showed you how to use the fax machine.” - that was hilarious. And sweet. Aww.
I do have one critique. As much as I adore Jonah and Gracie together, I felt like it was too soon for Jonah to pour his heart out to her. Jonah is a very careful guy (of course you know that - you wrote him) so I thought it was a bit out of character for him to confess his feelings for her just like that. I thought it'd be more drawn out - like we'd have to wait near the climax of the story for some kind of confession. So in that respect, I feel it was rushed. The other side of me is still very happy that you didn't beat around the bush. They are so cute together.
And I'm pleased that Undiscovered as helped you out! It's finally getting some of the attention it deserves. I feel like justice is being served. Or something. It's a nice feeling.
Whew! Long review. Anyway, keep the updates coming and I hope you feel better soon :)
~Hera
2Minty FOh goodness, it's so wonderful to come back from vacation to all of these new chapters! Especially now that the story is getting all intense... I'm literally shivering with excitement.
So, I pretty much dislike everyone in the story right now except for Gracie, Jonah, and Cassie.
Carlin's true nature really surprised me. I should have seen it coming - I mean, there was something odd about that guy. I knew there had to be a character defect in there somewhere. But I didn't know it was THAT bad. Geez. I'm glad Gracie didn't end up with him.
Simon and Sarah make me angry. I'm not a huge fan of people that are narrow-minded and are quick to jump to conclusions. Both of them are acting so immature and ignorant. Really, Gracie has a heart of gold. She would never do that to Danielle. At least her own twin should know that. *shakes head*
Okay, I'll admit it: I squealed like a love-struck piglet when I read the scene between Jonah and Gracie. Could the man GET any sweeter? And that line - “I think I've loved you since you came into work three years ago and bugged me for two months until I gave in and showed you how to use the fax machine.” - that was hilarious. And sweet. Aww.
I do have one critique. As much as I adore Jonah and Gracie together, I felt like it was too soon for Jonah to pour his heart out to her. Jonah is a very careful guy (of course you know that - you wrote him) so I thought it was a bit out of character for him to confess his feelings for her just like that. I thought it'd be more drawn out - like we'd have to wait near the climax of the story for some kind of confession. So in that respect, I feel it was rushed. The other side of me is still very happy that you didn't beat around the bush. They are so cute together.
And I'm pleased that Undiscovered as helped you out! It's finally getting some of the attention it deserves. I feel like justice is being served. Or something. It's a nice feeling.
Whew! Long review. Anyway, keep the updates coming and I hope you feel better soon :)
~Hera
7/1/2009 c13 MarloCarlo10
Damn I can't believe no one believes her and that Carlin was such an asshole!
Damn I can't believe no one believes her and that Carlin was such an asshole!
7/1/2009 c3 Lynne Featherston
Yeah...Shakespeare is kinda overrated.
I heart all of these characters. They're fun. Fun, fun, fun. Cassie's really cool. Don't know much about Renee, yet. Devon's a slight mystery, but I think I like him quite a bit. Any guy who's upset because Kristin Chenoweth is out of his league can't be all bad.
And oh my gosh. All that between Simon and Gracie was just wonderful. It's like a Sam/Diane thing going on. Or...well, I can't think of a more modern reference. Daniel/Vala, maybe? Without the violence?
*hugs Gracie, cause she needs comforts*
Yeah...Shakespeare is kinda overrated.
I heart all of these characters. They're fun. Fun, fun, fun. Cassie's really cool. Don't know much about Renee, yet. Devon's a slight mystery, but I think I like him quite a bit. Any guy who's upset because Kristin Chenoweth is out of his league can't be all bad.
And oh my gosh. All that between Simon and Gracie was just wonderful. It's like a Sam/Diane thing going on. Or...well, I can't think of a more modern reference. Daniel/Vala, maybe? Without the violence?
*hugs Gracie, cause she needs comforts*
7/1/2009 c2 Lynne Featherston
No, no. You want to get over him, Gracie. You want to get over him.
That would be so awesome to have a sister who was in 'Phantom'. Even just the chorus. But Meg? Freakin' awesome!
I can see where Sarah is good for Gracie. But I can also see where they could constantly butt heads. It's really quite a bit like my sister and I. She's more like Sarah, I'm more like Gracie. And I love her dearly, but we can get into some serious fights sometimes.
Third chapter ahoy!
P.S. I REALLY like Jonah.
No, no. You want to get over him, Gracie. You want to get over him.
That would be so awesome to have a sister who was in 'Phantom'. Even just the chorus. But Meg? Freakin' awesome!
I can see where Sarah is good for Gracie. But I can also see where they could constantly butt heads. It's really quite a bit like my sister and I. She's more like Sarah, I'm more like Gracie. And I love her dearly, but we can get into some serious fights sometimes.
Third chapter ahoy!
P.S. I REALLY like Jonah.
7/1/2009 c1 Lynne Featherston
*Mel dances onto scene*
Heavens! Where have I been for all this? Bad Melanie! Bad, bad!
This is awesome! I heart Gracie! I even heart the unnamed blond cellist!
I am off to read more.
~Mel
Who wishes she could write original fiction as well as Aurette
*Mel dances onto scene*
Heavens! Where have I been for all this? Bad Melanie! Bad, bad!
This is awesome! I heart Gracie! I even heart the unnamed blond cellist!
I am off to read more.
~Mel
Who wishes she could write original fiction as well as Aurette
7/1/2009 c14 earlkgm
omg. I loved it. I hate hate hate Sarah Right now though. And I honestly hope that Danielle and Grace's parents belives Grace. I feel like Grace should get courage enough to either go on stage and be better than Sarah or get her books published and be like the next Stephanie Meyer. lol. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
oh, p.s. I LOVE JOHAN AND GRACE!
omg. I loved it. I hate hate hate Sarah Right now though. And I honestly hope that Danielle and Grace's parents belives Grace. I feel like Grace should get courage enough to either go on stage and be better than Sarah or get her books published and be like the next Stephanie Meyer. lol. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
oh, p.s. I LOVE JOHAN AND GRACE!
7/1/2009 c14 13Laugh With Rage
Amazingness! As sad as sarah turning on Grace is, it's all made better, as far as I'm concerned, by Jonah. Hope you feel better soon!
13Laugh With RageAmazingness! As sad as sarah turning on Grace is, it's all made better, as far as I'm concerned, by Jonah. Hope you feel better soon!
6/30/2009 c4 MarloCarlo10
Haha I loved that he called her Grace Kelly ;) And the fact that she was at a total loss :)
Haha I loved that he called her Grace Kelly ;) And the fact that she was at a total loss :)
6/30/2009 c3 MarloCarlo10
Hey! No talkie bad about Kansas. ;) I live there. Why not Nebraska? Hahaha JK
Devon is pretty interesting!
Haha "Simon the Cello Playing Asshole"...cracked me up.
Hey! No talkie bad about Kansas. ;) I live there. Why not Nebraska? Hahaha JK
Devon is pretty interesting!
Haha "Simon the Cello Playing Asshole"...cracked me up.
6/30/2009 c1 MarloCarlo10
I'm going to like this! I'm glad I went through my story alerts and looked at your profile ;)
I'm going to like this! I'm glad I went through my story alerts and looked at your profile ;)