6/30/2009 c14 2A Tentative Possibility
I cried when Gracie was begging Jonah. The last two chapters were so... catastrophic.

The Jonah confession thing was a bit overwhelming and unexpected. I mean, I was pretty sure he did have feelings for her but I hadn't imagined him gallantly declaring his love for her so soon.

I'm awaiting the next update. Get better soon!

6/30/2009 c14 Nourgelitnius
WONDERFUL! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!

6/30/2009 c14 Terras1fan-inactive
I squealed when I got my alert for the new chapter. (:

Aww, but it's so sweet. I love Jonah. He's a doll. Precious and adorable cuteness.

My only comment or criticism would be the beginning of Jonah and Gracie's conversation. Or, really, Gracie's blabbing. I like the babbling. I think my problem was there was so much dialogue! I think if you come over the area with a persnickety eye and rewrite/add in a few thing, then the scene would be perfect.

And lastly, I find this amusing so I'm sharing. I find it incredibly funny that I have been singing all morning the Winnie the Pooh song ("I'm just a little black rain cloud. Pay not attention to me."), and as I am desperate to get the song out of my head, I try to distract myself. However, everywhere turn I find something about rain. Including here. (:

Anyways, get better, Aurette!

6/30/2009 c14 MusicallyJ
OMG THAT was soo

idk

cute adorable and yay for her

her SIS is a bitch

stupid bitch

FINALLy jonah came out and told her

oh yay Grace & Jonah

Joace or Granah

Grah Jonace idk

Update soon

6/30/2009 c14 BoredomKills0620
I KNEW Carlin was a filthy scumbag! I just wasn't aware how much! Ick! What a complete slime. I hope Danielle finds out the truth. And what on earth? Simon gets the Bad Boyfriend Award (now ex; yus-s-s-s-s...), and Sarah gets the Bad Sister Award. I knew Jonah would believe her! :D I knew she could count on him. But WOW, was I not expecting the confession of love yet. Or the kisses :D Awesome! The confession was slightly cheesy, I think, but it was very sweet and adorable and had me squealing like a little schoolgirl with a crush on the inside. Jeez-louise, I love Jonah. He's the only one that deserves her. She'd be slightly dumb not to love him back, but I think it's slowly starting to happen already. (I love how she thought of Jonah during the tickle match with icky Carlin. ;) She seems to think of him a lot.) Well. Needless to say, I definitely cannot wait to see what happens next! (Especially if Jonah is involved, hahaha. If Gracie turns out to be dumb and doesn't want him, please magically bring him to life and give him to me...) I await the next chapter on the edge of my seat :D

God bless,

Chelsea

6/30/2009 c14 4under the influence
Yay!

Now I'm really curious how the rest of it is going to work out...and how Gracie's gonna get her purse back...hehehe

I'm sorry to hear that you're not feeling well...hope you get better soon :)

6/29/2009 c13 Nourgelitnius
HE DIDN'T! NO. . . but then. . . if it helps move the story, oh well. Oh, where is Jonah when you need him? Did the note that she was taking the day off send Jonah to her apartment for an explanation (was he worried she was sick) and then he finds her like that? Oh. The suspense.

Good job! I personally could do without the swearing, but I feel that since you are the one writing the story (one that I absolutely love) I am not in a place to tell you how to do it.