for To Feel the Sun6/26/2009 c11 SoundOfMind
Love this, it keeps getting better.
Keep it up
You're awesome for liking Buckley
Love this, it keeps getting better.
Keep it up
You're awesome for liking Buckley
6/26/2009 c11 JaseyxRae
Aurette, the amazing author-
Wow, I don't even know what to say about this story.
When reading this (all in one go) I was gasping, laughing, cringing, and basically making really embarrassing facial expressions all throughout this story because I was SO incredibally into it. I'm completely drawn into this amazing story you have going. I don't know what it is about the characters but I'm so attached to them.
And, by the way, I'm absolutely in lovelovelove with Jonah. OH MY GOD. I LOVE HIM. Gracie NEEDS to get together with Jonah, who is SO obviously in love with her. At the beginning I loved Jonah but was resigned to the fact that we were "supposed" to like Simon better because of their passionate exchanges and how he's not as good looking and isn't as rich. He's the underdog and mysterious and we were supposed to like him but I totally loved Jonah way more and now I'm thinking Gracie's going to end up with Jonah which is making me SO HAPPY. she just has to get together with him! (sorry, normally I'm more eloquent than this. But I'm kind of speechless.)
When reading this story, I feel like I should be reading it out of a book. I love it to pieces. It's kind of incredibly sad and nerdy at how much I love this story (:
I don't know how fast you update but it I know it won't be fast enough (can you update instantly? that would be great :P). I literally gasped and yelled "NO!" when I realized that there weren't any chapters left to read after this. Which means - UPDATE SOON PLEASE I BEG OF YOU. and bring me some Jonah (;
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. So glad this was recommended (HIGHLY recommended, btw) to me!
*adds to alert and favorites*
Till your next update,
your new faithfull reader,
Kitty
PS: I don't normally write reviews like this. actually, I don't normally review (i know, i'm bad). So this is like incredibly high praise from me (:
Aurette, the amazing author-
Wow, I don't even know what to say about this story.
When reading this (all in one go) I was gasping, laughing, cringing, and basically making really embarrassing facial expressions all throughout this story because I was SO incredibally into it. I'm completely drawn into this amazing story you have going. I don't know what it is about the characters but I'm so attached to them.
And, by the way, I'm absolutely in lovelovelove with Jonah. OH MY GOD. I LOVE HIM. Gracie NEEDS to get together with Jonah, who is SO obviously in love with her. At the beginning I loved Jonah but was resigned to the fact that we were "supposed" to like Simon better because of their passionate exchanges and how he's not as good looking and isn't as rich. He's the underdog and mysterious and we were supposed to like him but I totally loved Jonah way more and now I'm thinking Gracie's going to end up with Jonah which is making me SO HAPPY. she just has to get together with him! (sorry, normally I'm more eloquent than this. But I'm kind of speechless.)
When reading this story, I feel like I should be reading it out of a book. I love it to pieces. It's kind of incredibly sad and nerdy at how much I love this story (:
I don't know how fast you update but it I know it won't be fast enough (can you update instantly? that would be great :P). I literally gasped and yelled "NO!" when I realized that there weren't any chapters left to read after this. Which means - UPDATE SOON PLEASE I BEG OF YOU. and bring me some Jonah (;
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. So glad this was recommended (HIGHLY recommended, btw) to me!
*adds to alert and favorites*
Till your next update,
your new faithfull reader,
Kitty
PS: I don't normally write reviews like this. actually, I don't normally review (i know, i'm bad). So this is like incredibly high praise from me (:
6/25/2009 c11 Oboe Jenkins
I am so happy that you wrote and i had something to read when i got back home!
I don't know if you'd call this a prediction more of a what-Oboe-wants-to-happen than a prediction, but what the heck right. Anyway i want something to happen between Jonah and Grace. I'm a bit of a dramatic so i'd say he's kisses her in the filing room at work or some such and she gets all those feelings about Jonah that Danielle was asking if she had about Simon who she is still going out with. Then some other things happen that you can decide about and she ends up with Jonah.
I like to boss people:) But i really can't wait to hear whatever you have to say.
I am so happy that you wrote and i had something to read when i got back home!
I don't know if you'd call this a prediction more of a what-Oboe-wants-to-happen than a prediction, but what the heck right. Anyway i want something to happen between Jonah and Grace. I'm a bit of a dramatic so i'd say he's kisses her in the filing room at work or some such and she gets all those feelings about Jonah that Danielle was asking if she had about Simon who she is still going out with. Then some other things happen that you can decide about and she ends up with Jonah.
I like to boss people:) But i really can't wait to hear whatever you have to say.
6/24/2009 c11 GraceElaganceandBeauty
please update!
please update!
6/24/2009 c11 
4under the influence
Jeff Buckley died? Well, there goes my day...
Anyway, the chapter was great. I still find myself wanting to physically harm Danielle, but that's only because the whole thing hits way too close to home for me. It was nice to see her insecurities...and I bet it made Gracie feel a bit better (even if she wouldn't 'get' Carlin)
I've noticed that you don't put question marks in some statements that are questions...
4under the influenceJeff Buckley died? Well, there goes my day...
Anyway, the chapter was great. I still find myself wanting to physically harm Danielle, but that's only because the whole thing hits way too close to home for me. It was nice to see her insecurities...and I bet it made Gracie feel a bit better (even if she wouldn't 'get' Carlin)
I've noticed that you don't put question marks in some statements that are questions...
6/23/2009 c10 1PRC260391
So glad you got featured in Undiscovered, you totally deseve it.
Anyway, I loved it and can't wait to see what happens next, I don't know why but I have this gut feeling that tells me you are going to surprise me:)
ps: I'm so glad you decided to make this a humor story, those are my favorites.
1PRC260391So glad you got featured in Undiscovered, you totally deseve it.
Anyway, I loved it and can't wait to see what happens next, I don't know why but I have this gut feeling that tells me you are going to surprise me:)
ps: I'm so glad you decided to make this a humor story, those are my favorites.
6/19/2009 c10 2A Tentative Possibility
Ah... that Renee is cruel. I hope Cassie and Devon DO get together. I'm looking forward to reading about the dinner.
I think Jonah will end up going with them. Or something.
Have a good trip :)
2A Tentative PossibilityAh... that Renee is cruel. I hope Cassie and Devon DO get together. I'm looking forward to reading about the dinner.
I think Jonah will end up going with them. Or something.
Have a good trip :)
6/19/2009 c10 Discovering
*gasp* Renee is being cold. And really, I DID gasp after reading what she said. Goodness. I hope she gets what's coming to her.
Simon continues to slightly annoy me, haha. He comes off as clingy and definitely insecure. Sometimes that can be cute in a guy, but it irritates me with Simon. Probably because Jonah is my clear favorite. He does kind of remind me of a British butler. Only because he's very proper and reserved. But that's what I love about his character!
Even though he refused to go on the trip to Ireland, he just *has* to go. I can't think of a better way for him to spend quality time with Grace without the interference of Simon. I also want to know what's the deal with his grandfather. Hmm... Jonah has grown more mysterious.
Ah! I lunch date with Danielle! I have a feeling this isn't going to be good.
Thanks for the shout-out! We at Undiscovered think you're pretty awesome, too :)
Update soon~!
*gasp* Renee is being cold. And really, I DID gasp after reading what she said. Goodness. I hope she gets what's coming to her.
Simon continues to slightly annoy me, haha. He comes off as clingy and definitely insecure. Sometimes that can be cute in a guy, but it irritates me with Simon. Probably because Jonah is my clear favorite. He does kind of remind me of a British butler. Only because he's very proper and reserved. But that's what I love about his character!
Even though he refused to go on the trip to Ireland, he just *has* to go. I can't think of a better way for him to spend quality time with Grace without the interference of Simon. I also want to know what's the deal with his grandfather. Hmm... Jonah has grown more mysterious.
Ah! I lunch date with Danielle! I have a feeling this isn't going to be good.
Thanks for the shout-out! We at Undiscovered think you're pretty awesome, too :)
Update soon~!
6/19/2009 c10 Nourgelitnius
I think that the story is just fine the way it is. All angst needs humor to counter it. Congrat's on your discovery! I will have to check out that site in your honor and see what else they have.
So, you know the end (it's Jonah, isn't it! You know it is!) I couple tell my prediction, but I dont think I will. I will mull over it a couple more postings.
Have fun on your trip. I get to go on a vacation myself (kinda) to the Seattle area and cannot wait!
PLEASE POST SOON! Thank you.
I think that the story is just fine the way it is. All angst needs humor to counter it. Congrat's on your discovery! I will have to check out that site in your honor and see what else they have.
So, you know the end (it's Jonah, isn't it! You know it is!) I couple tell my prediction, but I dont think I will. I will mull over it a couple more postings.
Have fun on your trip. I get to go on a vacation myself (kinda) to the Seattle area and cannot wait!
PLEASE POST SOON! Thank you.
6/19/2009 c10 2Annaface
Jonah = total sweetheart :]
I really, really like this story! Could you possibly link me to the site you mentioned in your author's note(Undiscovered)? :]
2AnnafaceJonah = total sweetheart :]
I really, really like this story! Could you possibly link me to the site you mentioned in your author's note(Undiscovered)? :]
6/19/2009 c10 Terras1fan-inactive
lol. It took me forever to figure out the whole "Oh" and the letter P joke. I'm so lame. *sheepish*
Oh, and I hate Renee! And Devon.. somewhat, mainly, Renee! lol. But I love these dramatic twists and characters. :)
Keep updating [motivational pep talk]!
- Terra
lol. It took me forever to figure out the whole "Oh" and the letter P joke. I'm so lame. *sheepish*
Oh, and I hate Renee! And Devon.. somewhat, mainly, Renee! lol. But I love these dramatic twists and characters. :)
Keep updating [motivational pep talk]!
- Terra
6/19/2009 c9 5Maria Gracia
Im going to give Undiscovered some love after this, because otherwise I wouldnt have read this UNBELIABLE stories you write. I really cant wait for the updates, and Im a patient person.
Jonah, well hes my cup up of tea. I like quiet and reserved guys, I dont like the loveydovey stories and the they lived happily ever after. I believe you have to work for love, and I think marriages are a parnership, my parents have been toguether for 20 years and my both my grandparents for 47 and 51 years. So yeah.
I loved the fact that Jonah spilled his coffee on himself and the way he reacts are completely natural and relatable.
This story is honest and well its real, which is more than I can say from most stories Ive read here. So yeah you have a fan now! The name is MaGa! or maria gracia.
LOVE THIS. I think Ill jump when I get the update email on my fictionpress folder... -smiles-
5Maria GraciaIm going to give Undiscovered some love after this, because otherwise I wouldnt have read this UNBELIABLE stories you write. I really cant wait for the updates, and Im a patient person.
Jonah, well hes my cup up of tea. I like quiet and reserved guys, I dont like the loveydovey stories and the they lived happily ever after. I believe you have to work for love, and I think marriages are a parnership, my parents have been toguether for 20 years and my both my grandparents for 47 and 51 years. So yeah.
I loved the fact that Jonah spilled his coffee on himself and the way he reacts are completely natural and relatable.
This story is honest and well its real, which is more than I can say from most stories Ive read here. So yeah you have a fan now! The name is MaGa! or maria gracia.
LOVE THIS. I think Ill jump when I get the update email on my fictionpress folder... -smiles-
6/16/2009 c9 1PRC260391
I really like this story, it's been a while since I last found a story I liked here on FP.
The pace was a little off in the first 2-3 chapters (nothing serious, just a minor detail), but the story (and your writing) seems to have gotten better in later chapters.
Please continue with it, I look forward to reading more.
1PRC260391I really like this story, it's been a while since I last found a story I liked here on FP.
The pace was a little off in the first 2-3 chapters (nothing serious, just a minor detail), but the story (and your writing) seems to have gotten better in later chapters.
Please continue with it, I look forward to reading more.
6/16/2009 c8 Oboe Jenkins
Whoot i can review. My computer was being dumb yesterday and wouldn't let me. Anyway I still love the characters but Jonah (whose name i also love) is giving me some heart ache what is he getting at? Okay and I love the name Liam. I can't say more than that because he's just kind of there. Oh yeah and Jonah reminds me of a British butler. And one more thing Cassie makes me super happy because she talks like me and i have this giant want to be British thing going on. Whew. Thanks for writing this.
Whoot i can review. My computer was being dumb yesterday and wouldn't let me. Anyway I still love the characters but Jonah (whose name i also love) is giving me some heart ache what is he getting at? Okay and I love the name Liam. I can't say more than that because he's just kind of there. Oh yeah and Jonah reminds me of a British butler. And one more thing Cassie makes me super happy because she talks like me and i have this giant want to be British thing going on. Whew. Thanks for writing this.
6/16/2009 c9 2A Tentative Possibility
I found your story on Undiscovered, and just wanted to say that I now love it. The story's picking up pace a bit I think - the first chapters were well written but didn't hold my interest as much as the later ones. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! And Jonah rocks (that sounds a bit weird when you think about his character, but you know what I mean...)
2A Tentative PossibilityI found your story on Undiscovered, and just wanted to say that I now love it. The story's picking up pace a bit I think - the first chapters were well written but didn't hold my interest as much as the later ones. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! And Jonah rocks (that sounds a bit weird when you think about his character, but you know what I mean...)