
5/28/2009 c8 Kajal
I really like Jonah! I can't wait to see what happens between them.
I really like Jonah! I can't wait to see what happens between them.
5/3/2009 c7 SoundOfMind
This is so cute cept I like Jonah more than Simon. She should hook up with Jonah and soon!
Keep it up!
This is so cute cept I like Jonah more than Simon. She should hook up with Jonah and soon!
Keep it up!
4/25/2009 c1
4under the influence
I had this story in my favs for awhile, but was afraid to start reading it since you hadn't updated. I hate getting all caught up in a story that a person has stopped writing (for whatever reason)
ANYWAY, I started reading because I have been through a very similar situation, only I refused to go to the wedding and pretty much stopped being friends with the guy. You did a really good job with this and I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

I had this story in my favs for awhile, but was afraid to start reading it since you hadn't updated. I hate getting all caught up in a story that a person has stopped writing (for whatever reason)
ANYWAY, I started reading because I have been through a very similar situation, only I refused to go to the wedding and pretty much stopped being friends with the guy. You did a really good job with this and I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
1/27/2009 c1
3The True Dreamer
This chapter was so incredibly SWEET! I just can't wait to read more! This is going on my favorites^o^!

This chapter was so incredibly SWEET! I just can't wait to read more! This is going on my favorites^o^!
1/24/2009 c5
1Jessie My Love
I liked this chapter, not as much as the last, but it was still an important piece of the story. It was nice to see how rich the family was without you just simply stating that they were rich. Show not tell.
So yea, I like Jonah, he seems like an interesting character and I can't wait to find out more.
Update soon~
-Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward

I liked this chapter, not as much as the last, but it was still an important piece of the story. It was nice to see how rich the family was without you just simply stating that they were rich. Show not tell.
So yea, I like Jonah, he seems like an interesting character and I can't wait to find out more.
Update soon~
-Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward
1/24/2009 c4 Jessie My Love
Omgosh I loved the end. XD
The old guy just made it so funny.
Anyways, good chapter. I did actually notice a typo though. At one point who just wrote 'm' when it should've been 'me'.
So yea, good job. Onto the next one~
-Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward
Omgosh I loved the end. XD
The old guy just made it so funny.
Anyways, good chapter. I did actually notice a typo though. At one point who just wrote 'm' when it should've been 'me'.
So yea, good job. Onto the next one~
-Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward
1/24/2009 c3 Jessie My Love
I still love this story. I absolutely love all your characters. I don't really have a probably with any of them. I do wish it could've worked out with her and Carlin though. I think I like him more than cello guy, but ah well.
Anyways, onto the next chapter~
-Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward
I still love this story. I absolutely love all your characters. I don't really have a probably with any of them. I do wish it could've worked out with her and Carlin though. I think I like him more than cello guy, but ah well.
Anyways, onto the next chapter~
-Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward
1/24/2009 c2 Jessie My Love
I like the relationship between the twins. You actually show how close they are without just saying that they are close. Good job. :]
Well, this was another great chapter in the story. I like how your character is still kind of moping around without be all 'woe is me'.
Anyways, good chapter. Onto the next one~
-Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward
I like the relationship between the twins. You actually show how close they are without just saying that they are close. Good job. :]
Well, this was another great chapter in the story. I like how your character is still kind of moping around without be all 'woe is me'.
Anyways, good chapter. Onto the next one~
-Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward
1/24/2009 c1 Jessie My Love
I loved this.
Your main character is incredibly realistic as well as the rest of the characters in the story. She's a great narrator and adds a nice bit of humor into the story.
I especially liked the end with the bartender, it helped display another side of your character.
Anyways, great first chapter. Can't wait to see how this develops. :]
-Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward
I loved this.
Your main character is incredibly realistic as well as the rest of the characters in the story. She's a great narrator and adds a nice bit of humor into the story.
I especially liked the end with the bartender, it helped display another side of your character.
Anyways, great first chapter. Can't wait to see how this develops. :]
-Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward
1/14/2009 c1
22effervescent-sentiments
Oh, that was so cute! You're a very good writer, ma'dear. (This is Julia, by the way.) So - I like the main character so far (she has an interesting narrator, at least, though I have yet to see any defining traits or dialogue) and you did a very good job with her emotions (I almost cried with the scene when she's watching them get married, I did).
We shall see how this romance develops. Goody goody goody!

Oh, that was so cute! You're a very good writer, ma'dear. (This is Julia, by the way.) So - I like the main character so far (she has an interesting narrator, at least, though I have yet to see any defining traits or dialogue) and you did a very good job with her emotions (I almost cried with the scene when she's watching them get married, I did).
We shall see how this romance develops. Goody goody goody!
12/21/2008 c4
1Xanthe P
I love the whole chemistry thing between Simon and Grace; it's really interesting. Oh, and I completely didn't expect the ending at all! I'm glad Simon decided to be a little... 'assertive'.
And the fact that there was another guy in the elevator too! Priceless. I like your writing - it's got proper spelling and punctuation, for one. That's kind of hard to find on FP, and it automatically impresses me too. (:

I love the whole chemistry thing between Simon and Grace; it's really interesting. Oh, and I completely didn't expect the ending at all! I'm glad Simon decided to be a little... 'assertive'.
And the fact that there was another guy in the elevator too! Priceless. I like your writing - it's got proper spelling and punctuation, for one. That's kind of hard to find on FP, and it automatically impresses me too. (:
12/14/2008 c2
4predict.this
Your story is good! I wonder who's Grace is going to fall in love with. Cello guy and Joanh both look suspicious.

Your story is good! I wonder who's Grace is going to fall in love with. Cello guy and Joanh both look suspicious.