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12/17/2013 c14 daisukiklove
Soooo intense... I love Jonah more than ever!
12/17/2013 c13 daisukiklove
That fucking bastard!
12/17/2013 c11 daisukiklove
I'm starting to steer towards the ship-ment of Gracie & Jonah. Would make the cutest couple (in my opinion) he so gets her
12/17/2013 c8 daisukiklove
Ooh! Jonah's got a date?! He's soooo in love with Grace
12/17/2013 c4 daisukiklove
Is this all of Carlin's use? Not saying its bad just wondering
12/6/2013 c19 15Noellesco
Thank you for this. This was really adorable and asdkfjalskdfja. I love Jonah and Grace, and somehow, you really made me regret not studying Law (I chose Business Management instead). xD I don't know but you just have me speechless and I'm utterly lost for words. Normally, I would have a few bones to pick with an author at the end but this was amazing. Absolutely floored. Thank you, once again.

Just a small note... On chapter six, Jonah actually calls Grace 'Gracie'. I'm not sure if you meant that, hahaha. Here: " "Well, I couldn't have done it without Gracie," Jonah said. He smiled slightly at me, but turned away when Simon spoke up. " ;)
11/11/2013 c13 Anon
Ay yoo while I use all my precious time on this ridiculously hilarious story, I just want to let you know about a teeny weeny typo up in a paragraph where Carlin tells Gracie, "You're always going to hurt somebody in relationships that don't work out" and then it says Simon does something with a spatula but im pretttyyy suurreee we still talkin bout Carlin here u dig?
haha hope it helps :)
write on!
9/29/2013 c19 Dominique Diane
I cried. I cried when Jonah told Grace he was in loved with her. It was just so beautiful and sweet it broke my heart because, God! Every woman in earth would want that! Ahh, I was so happy when she got rid of Simon the asshole, really. Oh my freaking God, I can't still believe how wonderful and fantastic this story was really. I might as well just cry while writing this review. I can easily said this story got straight to my heart. It was real, it wasn't just fantasy, that's why I love it. It's not like all my favourite stories that have something supernatural or excessive action or even epic and obsessive love. No, this was real, this could easily be a real love experience of the writer. This story motivates me to keep writing, to keep with my ambitions in a way no other story had, and I don't even know why. While reading it for almost 3 hours, with read and tired eyes (Its 2:00 am in m Country) I couldn't stop smiling, biting my lip real hard to stop giggling and putting my covers over my head in a child fashion. Like I said (or wrote) before, this motivates me to do great things with my life because this story aside from entertaining me gave a lesson about love and expectations "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides. " and teach me that sometimes we have everything planned in life and in a single heartbeat everything can be screwed over, that many things we have in a pedestal are just wrong and some ideas we hold tight to not let go are bad for us. I thank you for opening my teenage eyes for me. Thank you and congratulations for such a awesome story.
9/24/2013 c14 genuisgina
Finally some real feelings. This is more like it.
9/24/2013 c12 genuisgina
I dont like grace much. She's too bossy. My fav is sarah i think she's really cool.
8/14/2013 c20 FallenMelancholic
How could you have left out the wedding details! It's honestly my first thought after reading the epilogue. I would have loved to know how Jonah proposed. :3 oh how I wish I have my own Jonah..

I've read 100 Love Letters beforehand and I couldn't help but compare TFtS to it. I wasn't impressed with the first few chapters of TFtS. I'm no critic, but I felt that there was a more mature and polished tone in the way you wrote 100LL. Maybe it's just the perspective, I don't know. Or just that you've improved. But what I know is that you're so good in creating and personifying characters that I'm sure you can pull off ANY story. And also, you know how to keep us on toes. Seriously, you're so good. This is gold for us picky readers. ΓΌ
6/11/2013 c13 cassiealan34
Love this
5/17/2013 c14 OMG
WHY DOES THIS STORY NOT HAVE 20,000 REVIEWS THIS IS SO AMAZING I JUST CAN'T. AH. OHMIGOSH I'M LIKE FANGIRLING ALL OVER THE PLACE THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER EVVEERRRRR

I LOVE YOU.

I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE STORIES FROM GRACIE'S PERSPECTIVE.

YOU'RE STORY. IS. SO. GREAT.

WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE MY LOVE FOR IT.
4/27/2013 c19 1why-are-you-my-remedy
This is an amazing story. I loved the way it was written and the plot was wonderful! :D And I also had kind of a hunch early on that Jonah liked Grace so now I'm very happy that they're married, haha.
3/19/2013 c1 Guest
oh my gosh.

dude. whomever reviewed before me. is. so. amazing.

hey, you. yeah, you. the person below me.

i love you.

you described my thoughts PERFECTLY.

thank you.

you're amazing.

let's be friends.
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