for To Feel the Sun3/15/2013 c14 Guest
Thank fuck. I would have been so disappointed if Jonah wasn't the one.
Thank fuck. I would have been so disappointed if Jonah wasn't the one.
3/4/2013 c1 
1justwhatevering
Finished!(:
Your writing is exquisite, and I was very pleased to finally read a story that used correct punctuation. I love how you can use larger words eloquently, without it seeming forced. I feel like your sentences flowed very naturally.
I'm going to read your sequel, for sure.
Brittney(:
1justwhateveringFinished!(:
Your writing is exquisite, and I was very pleased to finally read a story that used correct punctuation. I love how you can use larger words eloquently, without it seeming forced. I feel like your sentences flowed very naturally.
I'm going to read your sequel, for sure.
Brittney(:
3/4/2013 c4 justwhatevering
It astounds me that this story only has over 500 views. Your writing is fantastic, and I can't help but relate to Gracie.
I'll probably finish this entire story by tonight.
Congratulations, you have me hooked. That's no small feat.
Brittney(:
It astounds me that this story only has over 500 views. Your writing is fantastic, and I can't help but relate to Gracie.
I'll probably finish this entire story by tonight.
Congratulations, you have me hooked. That's no small feat.
Brittney(:
2/24/2013 c19 3junebird28
I just read this whole thing in a matter of hours and I loved it. The character progression was awesome, I love jonah and the complexity of the story was refreshing. It was a true pleasure reading this. Seriously one of the hidden gems on this website. Thank you for writing it :)
3junebird28I just read this whole thing in a matter of hours and I loved it. The character progression was awesome, I love jonah and the complexity of the story was refreshing. It was a true pleasure reading this. Seriously one of the hidden gems on this website. Thank you for writing it :)
1/5/2013 c20 1MissKukyMonster
Wow, beautiful story. I was skeptical for a while, just with the love triangle things, but, I quickly got over that with the interesting characters and plot. A rare find on fp, where you feel the things the characters feel, and you just can't get enough of the writing. Thanks for sharing!
1MissKukyMonsterWow, beautiful story. I was skeptical for a while, just with the love triangle things, but, I quickly got over that with the interesting characters and plot. A rare find on fp, where you feel the things the characters feel, and you just can't get enough of the writing. Thanks for sharing!
11/20/2012 c14 kate
Yahoo Jonah!
Yahoo Jonah!
11/20/2012 c9 kate
Team Jonah!
Team Jonah!
10/28/2012 c19 sneaky-fox
I loved loved loved this story! I deserves 5000 reviews!
I'm completely in love with Jonah and was from the beginning. Great writting and your character development throughout the story is really good. I didn't expect a whole lot when I started reading but I am seriously amazed by this story and I can't believe I haven't found it before.
Now I'm off to read the sequel :)
I loved loved loved this story! I deserves 5000 reviews!
I'm completely in love with Jonah and was from the beginning. Great writting and your character development throughout the story is really good. I didn't expect a whole lot when I started reading but I am seriously amazed by this story and I can't believe I haven't found it before.
Now I'm off to read the sequel :)
10/27/2012 c1 heal me forever
taking back mu words god did u just make devon nd dani couple oops i guess i have a prob wid my eyes gosh ..poor cassie but u made it CLEAR dat she moved on nd he doesnt have anything other dan platonic but ...i excepted but neverless i am reading it coz i LOVE DANI ND DEVON THOUGH i would perfer cassie wid devon u cant judge fate right so yeah :)
taking back mu words god did u just make devon nd dani couple oops i guess i have a prob wid my eyes gosh ..poor cassie but u made it CLEAR dat she moved on nd he doesnt have anything other dan platonic but ...i excepted but neverless i am reading it coz i LOVE DANI ND DEVON THOUGH i would perfer cassie wid devon u cant judge fate right so yeah :)
10/27/2012 c20 heal me forever
.god if u saw i just said in my other comment why u did not make devon love cassie gosh i checked ur profile for so real stry nd was gng through whether to read or not ;) see i am sucker to happy ending so i doesnt want myself to be crying after reading stry so ya i was reading d revewis nd guess wat :P i saw dat HIM my DEVON man u must be kidding ..*running to d stry *
.god if u saw i just said in my other comment why u did not make devon love cassie gosh i checked ur profile for so real stry nd was gng through whether to read or not ;) see i am sucker to happy ending so i doesnt want myself to be crying after reading stry so ya i was reading d revewis nd guess wat :P i saw dat HIM my DEVON man u must be kidding ..*running to d stry *
10/27/2012 c19 heal me forever
U KNOW i never cried after reading d stry..i mean d last part its like i will be sad ya happy never d one crying but here i am crying of course happy tears ...man DIS STRY MOVED ME TO DAMN EXTENT
i have so sooooooo much to say but words r less to describe dis STRY seriously! hands down dis is OUTRIGHT BANG ON!
wen rennee did dat to cassie i cried so much u know dats d bitchy thing done to ANYONE ! gosh unrequited love is very sad but has d most goddam it power :) i wished u would make devon nd cassie be together but i saw asequeal abut her stry so ya beeter off wid it ;)
here is jonah BOY I WOULD BE AWESUM IF WE HAVE SUCH PERSON ON DIS EARTH WID A LIFE sigh...i LOVE HIM i really do! d way he is ..dat is so...unfocreful..u know he never imposes her to love him even though it was killing her all d way along..god ..seriously i need ONE JONAH FOR myself..!
as i said i cant judge d stry coz its more dan DAT !
ND U KNOW TILL 14 CHAPTER I WAS LIKE GOSH DNT MAKE IT A love traingle for fucks sake ND was like why am i reading dis but IN CHAP 14 wat jonah did u know it MOVED ME ...!
one heck of astry deffo gng to cum back nd read it XOXOXO times
god bless :)
U KNOW i never cried after reading d stry..i mean d last part its like i will be sad ya happy never d one crying but here i am crying of course happy tears ...man DIS STRY MOVED ME TO DAMN EXTENT
i have so sooooooo much to say but words r less to describe dis STRY seriously! hands down dis is OUTRIGHT BANG ON!
wen rennee did dat to cassie i cried so much u know dats d bitchy thing done to ANYONE ! gosh unrequited love is very sad but has d most goddam it power :) i wished u would make devon nd cassie be together but i saw asequeal abut her stry so ya beeter off wid it ;)
here is jonah BOY I WOULD BE AWESUM IF WE HAVE SUCH PERSON ON DIS EARTH WID A LIFE sigh...i LOVE HIM i really do! d way he is ..dat is so...unfocreful..u know he never imposes her to love him even though it was killing her all d way along..god ..seriously i need ONE JONAH FOR myself..!
as i said i cant judge d stry coz its more dan DAT !
ND U KNOW TILL 14 CHAPTER I WAS LIKE GOSH DNT MAKE IT A love traingle for fucks sake ND was like why am i reading dis but IN CHAP 14 wat jonah did u know it MOVED ME ...!
one heck of astry deffo gng to cum back nd read it XOXOXO times
god bless :)
10/27/2012 c18 heal me forever
I once found this quote on the Internet and I thought it summed up our whole stupid situation very well. What I mean to say is none of us can really find the one person to be with. None of us can find that person to love. And it's so frustrating, because we're all so cold. We need that warmth. I like to look at love as the sun. You remember that poem I wrote, the good one, about love being a fire? Well, after I read this quote, that's when I realized it's also like the sun.
To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides. -David Viscott BY GOD WHERE DID U GET DES? HUH? MAN DES R AWESUM 3
I once found this quote on the Internet and I thought it summed up our whole stupid situation very well. What I mean to say is none of us can really find the one person to be with. None of us can find that person to love. And it's so frustrating, because we're all so cold. We need that warmth. I like to look at love as the sun. You remember that poem I wrote, the good one, about love being a fire? Well, after I read this quote, that's when I realized it's also like the sun.
To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides. -David Viscott BY GOD WHERE DID U GET DES? HUH? MAN DES R AWESUM 3