for To Feel the Sun8/20/2011 c10 
16non.graceful
Whenever Carlin pols up in the story, I assume that he's a girl.
I enjoy this story, but in some ways it's a bit slow.
Simon is a very big baby, but still somewhat cute.
16non.gracefulWhenever Carlin pols up in the story, I assume that he's a girl.
I enjoy this story, but in some ways it's a bit slow.
Simon is a very big baby, but still somewhat cute.
8/20/2011 c3 non.graceful
I like this story, but it feels odd seeing as the main character has my name.
You've written this story well.
I like this story, but it feels odd seeing as the main character has my name.
You've written this story well.
7/20/2011 c15 Geek and Proud
I 3 Geeks all the way. SOOOO proud of myself for figuring that out. I want that shirt now ^_^
I 3 Geeks all the way. SOOOO proud of myself for figuring that out. I want that shirt now ^_^
7/16/2011 c20 30Seph Meadowes
You are a queen. I enjoyed this story to bits. You made me care about the characters so much. Brava!
30Seph MeadowesYou are a queen. I enjoyed this story to bits. You made me care about the characters so much. Brava!
7/13/2011 c17 dipintheriverstyx
*RAISING HAND!*
It's funny, I normally can't stand to review...Especially not when a story is done.
But wow. You're a winner, I mean it.
PS: LOOOOVE Jonah's show of affection... I want a guy like HIM!
*RAISING HAND!*
It's funny, I normally can't stand to review...Especially not when a story is done.
But wow. You're a winner, I mean it.
PS: LOOOOVE Jonah's show of affection... I want a guy like HIM!
7/13/2011 c14 dipintheriverstyx
I have never gotten butterflies before, not in reality, or in a book.
And right now, I wouldn't even be shocked if I looked at my stomach and it was inside out. That makes no sense but Jesus.
My new favorite author? I think so!
I have never gotten butterflies before, not in reality, or in a book.
And right now, I wouldn't even be shocked if I looked at my stomach and it was inside out. That makes no sense but Jesus.
My new favorite author? I think so!
7/4/2011 c19 9The Golden Orchid
holy heaven! that was SUCH an amazing story! it had just the right amount of humor, tragedy and romance. gosh i love jonah and gracie! they make the perfect couple. really, they do.
i stumbled upon your story through undiscovered, and i'm sooo glad i did!
oh and i feel like i must let you know that the princess bride is my all time favorite movie too! it irks me that my friends have never watched it. that goes for doogie houser too...
that said, i want to let you know that you're a pretty darn good writer! but you probably know that already :P
why doesn't this story have more reviewssss!
gah! i'm going to go read the other two stories in this series now so goodbye and stay awesome! :D
9The Golden Orchidholy heaven! that was SUCH an amazing story! it had just the right amount of humor, tragedy and romance. gosh i love jonah and gracie! they make the perfect couple. really, they do.
i stumbled upon your story through undiscovered, and i'm sooo glad i did!
oh and i feel like i must let you know that the princess bride is my all time favorite movie too! it irks me that my friends have never watched it. that goes for doogie houser too...
that said, i want to let you know that you're a pretty darn good writer! but you probably know that already :P
why doesn't this story have more reviewssss!
gah! i'm going to go read the other two stories in this series now so goodbye and stay awesome! :D
6/21/2011 c1 1leavesfallingup
Ouch! She definitely knows how to make a poor first impression. I am interested to find out how she will dig herself out of that one, or if she will even try.
Unrequited love has become so cliche that it is treated like a joke... but it is cliche because of the frequency with which it occurs. It is also horribly painful and damaging to a person's self-esteem, because the lingering question is always: What is wrong with me that he/she couldn't love me?
A good start. Now to read more.
1leavesfallingupOuch! She definitely knows how to make a poor first impression. I am interested to find out how she will dig herself out of that one, or if she will even try.
Unrequited love has become so cliche that it is treated like a joke... but it is cliche because of the frequency with which it occurs. It is also horribly painful and damaging to a person's self-esteem, because the lingering question is always: What is wrong with me that he/she couldn't love me?
A good start. Now to read more.
6/19/2011 c19 Freakleash
Sometimes (try all the time), I wonder about Jonah's thought process. I mean, he seems so stoic and composed, but in the previous chapter, he talks about frustration and insanity and all that good stuff. Then there's love, selflessness, etc. I can't imagine at all how his mind works, but he's still so adorable :)
Forget I said anything about this epilogue. I read it again just now and couldn't remember why I'd had problems with it. Maybe I was just grumpy because Jonah and Gracie's story was over. But then I discovered the next two stories. They're still my favorite pair though. I dunno, I'm just stuck on them. I'm reading the other two again soon, but for now, I'm done. I promise! I've never liked bombarding people with messages/reviews. It feels weird. But I've got to go to bed anyway. Great, great job, once again! :)
PS On a side note, can I just say that I absolutely love Ireland? And the accents ;) Oh man. Haha :D I do plan on going there someday! It sounds beautiful.
Sometimes (try all the time), I wonder about Jonah's thought process. I mean, he seems so stoic and composed, but in the previous chapter, he talks about frustration and insanity and all that good stuff. Then there's love, selflessness, etc. I can't imagine at all how his mind works, but he's still so adorable :)
Forget I said anything about this epilogue. I read it again just now and couldn't remember why I'd had problems with it. Maybe I was just grumpy because Jonah and Gracie's story was over. But then I discovered the next two stories. They're still my favorite pair though. I dunno, I'm just stuck on them. I'm reading the other two again soon, but for now, I'm done. I promise! I've never liked bombarding people with messages/reviews. It feels weird. But I've got to go to bed anyway. Great, great job, once again! :)
PS On a side note, can I just say that I absolutely love Ireland? And the accents ;) Oh man. Haha :D I do plan on going there someday! It sounds beautiful.
6/19/2011 c15 Freakleash
Uh, just to clarify (I don't know, I feel like I have to), but I know Jonah isn't perfect. I HAVE read this and the next two stories (or what's posted of that third one) so I know he isn't supposed to be perfect. He has problems too, but it's like Gracie says. He's near-perfect :D And, well, I guess I just love his character :) Yeah, I'm gonna go finish the story now.
Uh, just to clarify (I don't know, I feel like I have to), but I know Jonah isn't perfect. I HAVE read this and the next two stories (or what's posted of that third one) so I know he isn't supposed to be perfect. He has problems too, but it's like Gracie says. He's near-perfect :D And, well, I guess I just love his character :) Yeah, I'm gonna go finish the story now.
6/19/2011 c14 Freakleash
This story. Just about kills me every time I read it. Especially this part of it. Why is Jonah so adorable? So..just... so Jonah? That's true, complete selfless love. I don't even know if that made sense. Why don't more people like him exist? My life would be complete (okay, not really) if I meet a guy, or even a person, as selfless and as close to perfect as Jonah is.
I feel like I'm stalking you. Sorry :D I know I've read and-oh, I'm so sorry. I thought I'd already reviewed this story. I guess I forgot to. Usually I'd review at the end but since I'm already making this, I'll just continue.
You're such a good author, seriously! The development, the plot, the characters. All so good! There are a few typos though, possibly just overlooked. I'm slightly iffy about the end (have I really not reviewed this before? I'm pretty sure I've thought that line already) though I can't explain why. But it's all good, there's more of them in the next two stories. :D
Great job on this one :)
This story. Just about kills me every time I read it. Especially this part of it. Why is Jonah so adorable? So..just... so Jonah? That's true, complete selfless love. I don't even know if that made sense. Why don't more people like him exist? My life would be complete (okay, not really) if I meet a guy, or even a person, as selfless and as close to perfect as Jonah is.
I feel like I'm stalking you. Sorry :D I know I've read and-oh, I'm so sorry. I thought I'd already reviewed this story. I guess I forgot to. Usually I'd review at the end but since I'm already making this, I'll just continue.
You're such a good author, seriously! The development, the plot, the characters. All so good! There are a few typos though, possibly just overlooked. I'm slightly iffy about the end (have I really not reviewed this before? I'm pretty sure I've thought that line already) though I can't explain why. But it's all good, there's more of them in the next two stories. :D
Great job on this one :)
5/31/2011 c19 Rikayla
This was so good. Was basically 'ahhh'ing all the way through the epilogue and the way Jonah finally let down his weird non-emotional-ness and became all gooey and arguing about nothing and him being jealous in that last chapter. VERY GOOD. 3
This was so good. Was basically 'ahhh'ing all the way through the epilogue and the way Jonah finally let down his weird non-emotional-ness and became all gooey and arguing about nothing and him being jealous in that last chapter. VERY GOOD. 3
5/30/2011 c14 Rikayla
So it's 2:42am and I am basically screaming silently at my computer monitor because oh my God, this Jonah man is perfect. HE IS PERFECT. Flawless except for the religiousness and somewhat lack-of-emotions but ah, sigh, omg. *_*
So it's 2:42am and I am basically screaming silently at my computer monitor because oh my God, this Jonah man is perfect. HE IS PERFECT. Flawless except for the religiousness and somewhat lack-of-emotions but ah, sigh, omg. *_*