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4/27/2009 c3 15Greenery
There are a few formatting issues here, but ignoring those it's a good story. I like :]
2/20/2009 c3 1GiGi26
I love the mystery in this story, very suspensful! Can't wait for the next update.
2/19/2009 c1 9MaskedNightingale
Nice beginning
1/5/2009 c2 4Frayling0
Hmm... glad to see a longer chappie this time, but I hope more happens in the next chapter. Much of this is taken up by the song. Good, nevertheless, keep it up.
12/21/2008 c2 15Greenery
neat! a few run on sentences but otherwise a good second chapter. not much has been revealed about your characters. can't wait to learn more about them!
12/21/2008 c1 Greenery
WOW this is really good so far. your description is mazing. very well done. the dialogue could maybe use some work. Punctuation goes inside quotation marks in dialogue, and when your characters are talking it doesn't seem as detailed. btu still really good. on to the next chapter!
12/16/2008 c2 5John Bark
It is AWESOME! write more plz
12/15/2008 c1 Alex James
why did u stop!

this is one of my favorites...but what ever happened to the other guy?
12/12/2008 c1 4Frayling0
Hm... interesting. I'm clueless but its good how you've formed an immediate mystery for the reader to disover what's going on. Good job :)

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