for Missing Memories4/27/2009 c3 
15Greenery
There are a few formatting issues here, but ignoring those it's a good story. I like :]
15GreeneryThere are a few formatting issues here, but ignoring those it's a good story. I like :]
2/20/2009 c3 1GiGi26
I love the mystery in this story, very suspensful! Can't wait for the next update.
1GiGi26I love the mystery in this story, very suspensful! Can't wait for the next update.
1/5/2009 c2 4Frayling0
Hmm... glad to see a longer chappie this time, but I hope more happens in the next chapter. Much of this is taken up by the song. Good, nevertheless, keep it up.
4Frayling0Hmm... glad to see a longer chappie this time, but I hope more happens in the next chapter. Much of this is taken up by the song. Good, nevertheless, keep it up.
12/21/2008 c2 15Greenery
neat! a few run on sentences but otherwise a good second chapter. not much has been revealed about your characters. can't wait to learn more about them!
15Greeneryneat! a few run on sentences but otherwise a good second chapter. not much has been revealed about your characters. can't wait to learn more about them!
12/21/2008 c1 Greenery
WOW this is really good so far. your description is mazing. very well done. the dialogue could maybe use some work. Punctuation goes inside quotation marks in dialogue, and when your characters are talking it doesn't seem as detailed. btu still really good. on to the next chapter!
WOW this is really good so far. your description is mazing. very well done. the dialogue could maybe use some work. Punctuation goes inside quotation marks in dialogue, and when your characters are talking it doesn't seem as detailed. btu still really good. on to the next chapter!
12/15/2008 c1 Alex James
why did u stop!
this is one of my favorites...but what ever happened to the other guy?
why did u stop!
this is one of my favorites...but what ever happened to the other guy?