
12/14/2008 c1 Spurlunk
This is good as a one-shot but kind of also feels like the end of a story.
Either way, I liked it a lot. But I find myself hating your main character's friends. xP
This is good as a one-shot but kind of also feels like the end of a story.
Either way, I liked it a lot. But I find myself hating your main character's friends. xP
12/13/2008 c1
11La Demoiselle Aline
Aw, that was a very sweet story :)
I love how Keiran is just so...idk, but he's such a good person! I love it, keep up the good work!

Aw, that was a very sweet story :)
I love how Keiran is just so...idk, but he's such a good person! I love it, keep up the good work!
12/13/2008 c1 Obsession Changes Things
UM... MORE PLEASE?. I WAS SO GETTING INTO IT BECAUSE I THOUGHT IT WAS A STORY NOT A ONESHOT, AND NOW I'M SAD IT'S OVER IT WOULD HAVE BEEN REALLY GOOD AS A STORY. LOVED IT.
~OBSESSION
UM... MORE PLEASE?. I WAS SO GETTING INTO IT BECAUSE I THOUGHT IT WAS A STORY NOT A ONESHOT, AND NOW I'M SAD IT'S OVER IT WOULD HAVE BEEN REALLY GOOD AS A STORY. LOVED IT.
~OBSESSION