for Bet You Can't!10/1/2012 c15 
8whatdotheydream
OHMYDEARGOD. Her "baby" did die! Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooo...Geez. Do you HAVE to make me so sad? Agh. Poor, poor Tanya!
8whatdotheydreamOHMYDEARGOD. Her "baby" did die! Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooo...Geez. Do you HAVE to make me so sad? Agh. Poor, poor Tanya!
9/15/2012 c16 rocsanna2
I loved it, I loved it, I really really loved it! You've done an amazing job with this one, so good luck!
I loved it, I loved it, I really really loved it! You've done an amazing job with this one, so good luck!
8/27/2012 c16 heal me forever
wow dis is awesum...u shuld have inculded d 11 grade as flashblack..nd all making it as 30 chpaters:P neverless...its an amzing stry...love kynd nick 3 xxx
wow dis is awesum...u shuld have inculded d 11 grade as flashblack..nd all making it as 30 chpaters:P neverless...its an amzing stry...love kynd nick 3 xxx
8/9/2012 c16 S
Me again, didn't realise original was also up. LOL.
Me again, didn't realise original was also up. LOL.
8/9/2012 c16 S
It's been years, where's that epilogue you promised?
Also, since Devit take it all is on hiatus, I didn't understand several parts of this story : please put up the original again?
It's been years, where's that epilogue you promised?
Also, since Devit take it all is on hiatus, I didn't understand several parts of this story : please put up the original again?
7/13/2012 c16 inkwriter95
Ok, lots of review-y stuff here. First, I really liked this story. It was nice and long and interesting all the way through. That said, I think it may have gone a little too fast. Yeah, I know, the whole ky-Tanya sex scene was all set up but... Well, I think their relationship should have taken longer to, uh, mend. You could have just had them sleep in the same bed, accidentally or something, and that would trigger the flashback. Oh well, it's your story. Also, I think you could've used a bit more background on some of the characters, like neveda, thane, and Jonah. I felt like I was missing something when they were brought up. Anyway, lovely story, good structure, nice grammar, I'm just sad it's over. )
Ok, lots of review-y stuff here. First, I really liked this story. It was nice and long and interesting all the way through. That said, I think it may have gone a little too fast. Yeah, I know, the whole ky-Tanya sex scene was all set up but... Well, I think their relationship should have taken longer to, uh, mend. You could have just had them sleep in the same bed, accidentally or something, and that would trigger the flashback. Oh well, it's your story. Also, I think you could've used a bit more background on some of the characters, like neveda, thane, and Jonah. I felt like I was missing something when they were brought up. Anyway, lovely story, good structure, nice grammar, I'm just sad it's over. )
6/25/2012 c15 ForgottenHope
I read this story before years ago. I've never read a story on here twice because I never felt the desire to do so, but I just HAD to read this one again. And I enjoyed it just as much! Speaks volumes on your storytelling. Don't know if you're still planning on posting an epilogue, but I'd say go for it. Doesn't matter how long ago you last posted. :)
I read this story before years ago. I've never read a story on here twice because I never felt the desire to do so, but I just HAD to read this one again. And I enjoyed it just as much! Speaks volumes on your storytelling. Don't know if you're still planning on posting an epilogue, but I'd say go for it. Doesn't matter how long ago you last posted. :)
5/26/2012 c16 me
epilogue coming soon huh? well it's been 3 years. i don't know what your definition of "soon" is.
epilogue coming soon huh? well it's been 3 years. i don't know what your definition of "soon" is.