for The ABC's of Jack Sanders11/21/2015 c1 nerine croft
AHHHHHH! THIS WAS SO FUNNY! You're very talented!
AHHHHHH! THIS WAS SO FUNNY! You're very talented!
8/26/2015 c15 Man2man
Pliz update faster:*
Pliz update faster:*
8/26/2015 c15 Man2man
Type your review here.
This storo is dowpe update faster!3
Type your review here.
This storo is dowpe update faster!3
7/18/2015 c5 Guest
i hate delaney
i hate delaney
7/18/2015 c4 Guest
okay. that was...
okay. that was...
4/6/2015 c15 kaylie
Type your review here...girl m waiting for d squeal...dnt tell me it does nt av a continuation because i want to knw wat append to dem especially akiko delaney jack chris
Type your review here...girl m waiting for d squeal...dnt tell me it does nt av a continuation because i want to knw wat append to dem especially akiko delaney jack chris
11/15/2012 c15 Amber Dawn12
Wowee, u got emotional. I suppose the only way u can make it up is to post another chapter *hint hint*
Okay, fine, that wasn't really much of a hint but I REALLY REALLY want to know what happens next.
Wowee, u got emotional. I suppose the only way u can make it up is to post another chapter *hint hint*
Okay, fine, that wasn't really much of a hint but I REALLY REALLY want to know what happens next.
10/14/2012 c15 Bubbly Girl
You have an amazing story so far! I really hope that you update soon! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
You have an amazing story so far! I really hope that you update soon! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
9/8/2012 c15 UMMLC
Its been ages since you updated though I'm glad you finely did because I love this story and I really miss it. Its very scary to read about the brutal bashing though I loved reading about Jack and here kissing it was so cute! Please do more cute chapter with them.
Sincerely U MadeMyLifeComplete
Its been ages since you updated though I'm glad you finely did because I love this story and I really miss it. Its very scary to read about the brutal bashing though I loved reading about Jack and here kissing it was so cute! Please do more cute chapter with them.
Sincerely U MadeMyLifeComplete
9/5/2012 c15 Laura Z
It actually hurt to read how Aki got beaten up by hur boyfriend! And I love to see even more action between Jack and Del :D I love your story!
It actually hurt to read how Aki got beaten up by hur boyfriend! And I love to see even more action between Jack and Del :D I love your story!
9/3/2012 c3 Laura Z
Love it!
Love it!
8/30/2012 c15 
16anonymousvoice
as you are going into depth about the two characters i can't help but to love both of them. yes delaney frustrates me to the point of wanting to knock some sense into her, but she does care about the people she's close to.
i love how in this chapter you gave us flashbacks of akiko and hinamoto's relationship. i think they were needed no matter if some people might think this story doesn't make sense with the delaney point of view and then all of a sudden akiko view. i actually like it this way. sends a bigger message.
anyways i love this story so please update soon.
also if you are unhappy with the beginning of this story, then i think you should edit it to be in you're style now. i know it's a four-year old story, so if you want to edit then do it because a writer is never pleased with their work. just make a note of it in the authors note at the beginning of the story and inform people so you can make it the story YOU want it to be and appreciate, not something you won't at least like. do what you want and don't worry about us.
can't wait to read more!
16anonymousvoiceas you are going into depth about the two characters i can't help but to love both of them. yes delaney frustrates me to the point of wanting to knock some sense into her, but she does care about the people she's close to.
i love how in this chapter you gave us flashbacks of akiko and hinamoto's relationship. i think they were needed no matter if some people might think this story doesn't make sense with the delaney point of view and then all of a sudden akiko view. i actually like it this way. sends a bigger message.
anyways i love this story so please update soon.
also if you are unhappy with the beginning of this story, then i think you should edit it to be in you're style now. i know it's a four-year old story, so if you want to edit then do it because a writer is never pleased with their work. just make a note of it in the authors note at the beginning of the story and inform people so you can make it the story YOU want it to be and appreciate, not something you won't at least like. do what you want and don't worry about us.
can't wait to read more!
8/27/2012 c15 5Smitha
I love this story! It's so sad, but so interesting. Poor, Akiko :( She doesn't deserve a boyfriend like Hinamoto :(
Dear sweet lady, please update soon, so I can read the nice happy ending that brightens up my day like- Ahem, anyway... Please update soon? I'm dying to know what happens next.
5SmithaI love this story! It's so sad, but so interesting. Poor, Akiko :( She doesn't deserve a boyfriend like Hinamoto :(
Dear sweet lady, please update soon, so I can read the nice happy ending that brightens up my day like- Ahem, anyway... Please update soon? I'm dying to know what happens next.
8/26/2012 c15 twilightwinter
Hello I love your story is she a vergin? Plz plz plz keep writing I love the story :)
Hello I love your story is she a vergin? Plz plz plz keep writing I love the story :)