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12/16/2008 c1 arcane devices
This is INSANELY cool. No, seriously. I don't understand why we can't have more cool poetry like this running amok. Grasped a sense of free-will within the poem, and inspired these fingers to write again. This is definitely a showcase of a vintage style at it's finest. I hope to perfect the art as well.

Favorited because YOU'RE. JUST. THAT. GOOD.
12/15/2008 c1 1notfortheintelligent
you have been read and appreciated : )

I added this to my favs list. I love finding gems like this on fp!

Improvement wise, I can't think of much, other than that I can't understand anything after a few lines, but i guess thats the point lol

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