for All I Want For Christmas12/11/2013 c14 
1Arrowhead1996
That was so beautiful! I'm even proud of Adrienne for backing off and accepting that she couldn't compete.
1Arrowhead1996That was so beautiful! I'm even proud of Adrienne for backing off and accepting that she couldn't compete.
3/1/2011 c1 NatashaKaitlyn
I really like this story, it's so well written and it drew me in. I could tell that you liked One Tree Hill with the fashion website that developed into a full fledged company and with her mother taking control over the company. That is Brooke's life, yes?
I really like this story, it's so well written and it drew me in. I could tell that you liked One Tree Hill with the fashion website that developed into a full fledged company and with her mother taking control over the company. That is Brooke's life, yes?
12/18/2010 c5 carli
when we find out shes a designer and that tylers fiance asked her to make her wedding dress- for some reason that really reminds me of parent trap
and also the fact that shes a designer and head of her own compny with her mom acting as CEO reminds me of brook from one tree hill
when we find out shes a designer and that tylers fiance asked her to make her wedding dress- for some reason that really reminds me of parent trap
and also the fact that shes a designer and head of her own compny with her mom acting as CEO reminds me of brook from one tree hill
12/18/2010 c7 G
I'd like to start by saying that your story does have some nice ideas. An ex-girlfriend with a child could create some interesting drama, however, I am not a fan of the direction you followed. Quite honestly it felt like you were attempting to rip of the parent trap and combine it rather obviously with 'one tree hill'. Perhaps try to be a little more original next time. The characters had little depth and I felt worse for Adrienne than Isabella. You also seem to have a tendency to repeat yourself, in a previous chapter you wrote 'sick' approximately five times in two short paragraphs. I apologise for being a little harsh, it's just an opinion for you to take as you choose.
I'd like to start by saying that your story does have some nice ideas. An ex-girlfriend with a child could create some interesting drama, however, I am not a fan of the direction you followed. Quite honestly it felt like you were attempting to rip of the parent trap and combine it rather obviously with 'one tree hill'. Perhaps try to be a little more original next time. The characters had little depth and I felt worse for Adrienne than Isabella. You also seem to have a tendency to repeat yourself, in a previous chapter you wrote 'sick' approximately five times in two short paragraphs. I apologise for being a little harsh, it's just an opinion for you to take as you choose.
1/23/2010 c13 8castiel89
YES YES YES YES YES! Adrienne and Tyler are no more! WHOHO! Makes me a happy girl!
You know how i mentioned before how it makes me think of oth? I was wondering if adrienne would be the one to call off the wedding (like lindsey did to lucas). but, at least adrienne did it before they were standing at the altar, and tyler said i do.
and thank god hes getting back together with Bella!
8castiel89YES YES YES YES YES! Adrienne and Tyler are no more! WHOHO! Makes me a happy girl!
You know how i mentioned before how it makes me think of oth? I was wondering if adrienne would be the one to call off the wedding (like lindsey did to lucas). but, at least adrienne did it before they were standing at the altar, and tyler said i do.
and thank god hes getting back together with Bella!
1/23/2010 c14 Deeps
WOW! this story is pretty good and i cant wait for Adam and chantal's story.please update soon.
WOW! this story is pretty good and i cant wait for Adam and chantal's story.please update soon.
1/19/2010 c12 chng234
i believe tylor will regret for marrying adrienne. i hope he will make the correct decision
i believe tylor will regret for marrying adrienne. i hope he will make the correct decision
1/8/2010 c11 castiel89
so... i'm thinking i must have ESP or something...
why? you may ask?... well, it all starts with this story that i am addicted too. it had been awhile since there had been an update (although i should really be one to talk), and one day i thought 'hm... i really need an All I Want for Christmas fix...'
and what do you know... I GOTS IT! ;) totally made my day girl! so thank you :]
i love Chantal... so sneaky, but yet it's with the best of intentions. she and everyone else - sans Isabella's control freak of a mother and Adrienne the Annoying - can see that Bella and Tyler BELONG together. it's only a matter of time before they give in to the feelings they still harbor for each other, and give adorable Noah the family he wants and deserves.
YAY for Bella finally having the inner strength to stand up for herself against her mother. and for firing the bitch too! made me a contented reader :]
cant wait for more :]
so... i'm thinking i must have ESP or something...
why? you may ask?... well, it all starts with this story that i am addicted too. it had been awhile since there had been an update (although i should really be one to talk), and one day i thought 'hm... i really need an All I Want for Christmas fix...'
and what do you know... I GOTS IT! ;) totally made my day girl! so thank you :]
i love Chantal... so sneaky, but yet it's with the best of intentions. she and everyone else - sans Isabella's control freak of a mother and Adrienne the Annoying - can see that Bella and Tyler BELONG together. it's only a matter of time before they give in to the feelings they still harbor for each other, and give adorable Noah the family he wants and deserves.
YAY for Bella finally having the inner strength to stand up for herself against her mother. and for firing the bitch too! made me a contented reader :]
cant wait for more :]
12/30/2009 c10 love-tea
waa! love your story, can't wait for the next chapter. =D
waa! love your story, can't wait for the next chapter. =D
10/5/2009 c10 castiel89
You have no idea how excited I was to see that you had updated! *jumps for joy*
I loved the chapter! I want Isabella and Tyler to get even closer...and for him to FINALLY dump Adrienne.
Can't wait for the next update... I know how it gets with such busy schedules!
You have no idea how excited I was to see that you had updated! *jumps for joy*
I loved the chapter! I want Isabella and Tyler to get even closer...and for him to FINALLY dump Adrienne.
Can't wait for the next update... I know how it gets with such busy schedules!
10/4/2009 c10 chng234
obviously tyler is still in love with isabella. adrienne shld have realised by now. i hope tyler will face his feelings soon
obviously tyler is still in love with isabella. adrienne shld have realised by now. i hope tyler will face his feelings soon