for Burst and Clenched4/3/2009 c1 
24I'm just a dreamer
LOVE IT, LOVE IT
...that was really good
...i liked it
man...u are a really good writer
...
i am so jealous,
from britty :P
24I'm just a dreamerLOVE IT, LOVE IT
...that was really good
...i liked it
man...u are a really good writer
...
i am so jealous,
from britty :P
12/17/2008 c1 27Liebe Dance
I like the comparison in this to the crumpled paper. It worked really well; a nice parallel. I also really like the first 2 lines. They really made me think.
However, some parts confused me a little. Like how can you abruptly feel something that is ever present?
Anyways, I liked it :)
27Liebe DanceI like the comparison in this to the crumpled paper. It worked really well; a nice parallel. I also really like the first 2 lines. They really made me think.
However, some parts confused me a little. Like how can you abruptly feel something that is ever present?
Anyways, I liked it :)