
8/27/2009 c1
3JGPoetry
Again, you did a wonderful job! On another note...This totally sums up all of my relationships! D: Don't you hate that feeling?

Again, you did a wonderful job! On another note...This totally sums up all of my relationships! D: Don't you hate that feeling?
1/14/2009 c1
613DiaRose
their = there but that's the nitpicky typo review.
Here's the real review: BEAUTIFUL ENDING! You're getting really good! I wasn't sure it was going to end well from the beginning, but you pleasantly surprised me. Although the beginning isn't bad, it definitely has the potential to be better. I think that's where you need to focus in your writing improvement, because your endings are fabulous.
Love,
~Dia

their = there but that's the nitpicky typo review.
Here's the real review: BEAUTIFUL ENDING! You're getting really good! I wasn't sure it was going to end well from the beginning, but you pleasantly surprised me. Although the beginning isn't bad, it definitely has the potential to be better. I think that's where you need to focus in your writing improvement, because your endings are fabulous.
Love,
~Dia
12/20/2008 c1
7Alice Blake LeFevre
I know what you mean. You just build up everything around them and then they're just gone.

I know what you mean. You just build up everything around them and then they're just gone.