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2/7/2009 c1 35LittlePieceLove
One word:

AWESOME

Never read anything like it, it was amaazziingg.

I laughed so hard. xD
2/1/2009 c1 21Tiernan Hunter
Oh wow. Haven't been around for awhile, but I'm glad this is one of the first poems I've read since I've been back to fictionpress.

This is funny, morbid, and depressing all at the same time. Shows so many teens' views. I really love the way it sounds, even if the flow is a bit choppy in a few places. Kudos, I think this is really great.
1/18/2009 c1 1pretty colours
merry xmas! lol, rhymed AND made me laugh what more can you ask for?
1/12/2009 c1 37rhymemaker
You are so getting coal next year. Good poem, good rhyme, good grief go eat a happy meal and find your inner child again. : )
1/1/2009 c1 11thelasttears
i love it... idk christmas is not a terrible time forme but i think its way too comercial and materialistic now and i know way to many people that suffer horribly through this time... im not religious and i celebrate xmas and to me thats really stupid. i barely know why it's celebrated...
1/1/2009 c1 61neverendingdogs
haha nice!
12/26/2008 c1 11crimson-reverie
wow in a weird masochistic way i really like it.

i like the part about him telling the kids what to hear.
12/20/2008 c1 Lord Craigus
I liked this poem a lot. It's rare that you get someone actually saying they hate santa instead of love him. Different is good.
12/19/2008 c1 989East-0f-Eden
this is done in extremely poor taste.

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