for If He Didn't Have a Twin2/20/2010 c12 A. Marie. D
I love reading this story! It's awesome and very detailed a out everything. I also love the drama and this story is definetly one of a kind, but it's too bad that it's discontinued. I hope that one day you'll continue this. Best of luck with the new story that your revising! I'll be looking forward to reading that also ;D
I love reading this story! It's awesome and very detailed a out everything. I also love the drama and this story is definetly one of a kind, but it's too bad that it's discontinued. I hope that one day you'll continue this. Best of luck with the new story that your revising! I'll be looking forward to reading that also ;D
7/20/2009 c11 
3snowmyth
i was kind of disappointed about the eric-indie thing not happening. i kinda wanted john to find another girl, maybe from france or something. oh well =P
3snowmythi was kind of disappointed about the eric-indie thing not happening. i kinda wanted john to find another girl, maybe from france or something. oh well =P
5/21/2009 c6 Bah
This is kind of getting annoying. I'm starting to dislike Indie. Ah, I'm not done with the chappie yet, so.
This is kind of getting annoying. I'm starting to dislike Indie. Ah, I'm not done with the chappie yet, so.
5/9/2009 c12 Max and Rose
:) Like I said before, I love your writing. I cannot WAIT until the next chapter!
~Rose
:) Like I said before, I love your writing. I cannot WAIT until the next chapter!
~Rose
5/1/2009 c12 11Fay Diablo
Well, first of all, I'm sorry I took so long getting to this...
And I loved this, of course. I love your character interactions...Indie is still, of course, my favorite, but the rest of them are awesome, too.
And these long breaks between chapters...Jeez, Fry-ness, you're gonna be like me!
~Pyro~
11Fay DiabloWell, first of all, I'm sorry I took so long getting to this...
And I loved this, of course. I love your character interactions...Indie is still, of course, my favorite, but the rest of them are awesome, too.
And these long breaks between chapters...Jeez, Fry-ness, you're gonna be like me!
~Pyro~
4/25/2009 c11 AngelReader
lolz sorry, forced to review this chap instead...anyway
REALLY?
i'm the 50th reviewer!
omgomg can't believe it
thanks so much
you know what, i really don't think i want anything =]
thanks for asking though
i'll get back to you when i remember!
oh yeah
you CAN say...how wonderful i think your story is, how addicted i am with it, how much i love love love and adore this story...ah i'm pretty sure you know =P
lolz sorry, forced to review this chap instead...anyway
REALLY?
i'm the 50th reviewer!
omgomg can't believe it
thanks so much
you know what, i really don't think i want anything =]
thanks for asking though
i'll get back to you when i remember!
oh yeah
you CAN say...how wonderful i think your story is, how addicted i am with it, how much i love love love and adore this story...ah i'm pretty sure you know =P
4/23/2009 c12 AngelReader
OMG
IT'S AWESOME
I LOVE IT. end of sentence
keep writing!
and you HAVE to inform me of your updates
i can't hold the suspense!
OMG
IT'S AWESOME
I LOVE IT. end of sentence
keep writing!
and you HAVE to inform me of your updates
i can't hold the suspense!
4/21/2009 c12 3cndysweetmss
Hi when are you going to write another chapter, the story is really good, you should really write more chapters, hope you got my message.
3cndysweetmssHi when are you going to write another chapter, the story is really good, you should really write more chapters, hope you got my message.
3/22/2009 c3 10i found nemo
Ugh, I absolutely can't stand the Jennifer Lartons of the world.
I forgot to mention last review that you are a really good writer. I mean it, too. I don't know how to explain myself. You just have a way with words, and your vocabulary/range of words is really...impressive? That's not exactly the word I'm looking for, but bottom line: I'm a sucker for really good verbs that no one ever uses, and you totally use them (like, I remember seeing the word "punctuated" somewhere in this chapter. I think I died when I saw it) ... but yeah. Anyway. Now that I sound like a complete fool, I'm going to shut up.
10i found nemoUgh, I absolutely can't stand the Jennifer Lartons of the world.
I forgot to mention last review that you are a really good writer. I mean it, too. I don't know how to explain myself. You just have a way with words, and your vocabulary/range of words is really...impressive? That's not exactly the word I'm looking for, but bottom line: I'm a sucker for really good verbs that no one ever uses, and you totally use them (like, I remember seeing the word "punctuated" somewhere in this chapter. I think I died when I saw it) ... but yeah. Anyway. Now that I sound like a complete fool, I'm going to shut up.
3/22/2009 c2 i found nemo
I have to admit that I found your story and thought, "hmm.. this sounds interesting" but at the same time, I didn't expect it to be THAT interesting (that's not meant to be offensive in any way, I just mean I wasn't expecting to laugh and be as amused as I was). You have made a wonderful start and I sure as hell hope the rest of it is just as good! I really like James - however, I have this sinking feeling in the pit of my stomach that she's set up to canoodle (yes, I said canoodle) with his twin brother (whom I do not like. John is okay, but come on. James is clean cut. He's cute!) ...so please don't let it swing that way. I shall be very disappointed!
I have to admit that I found your story and thought, "hmm.. this sounds interesting" but at the same time, I didn't expect it to be THAT interesting (that's not meant to be offensive in any way, I just mean I wasn't expecting to laugh and be as amused as I was). You have made a wonderful start and I sure as hell hope the rest of it is just as good! I really like James - however, I have this sinking feeling in the pit of my stomach that she's set up to canoodle (yes, I said canoodle) with his twin brother (whom I do not like. John is okay, but come on. James is clean cut. He's cute!) ...so please don't let it swing that way. I shall be very disappointed!
3/1/2009 c1 Chancee
I like this prologue.
They seemed to be a little compulsive with the prioritizing.
My, my.
I like the descriptions and the bubbly way you present your main character.
I found it cute about things needing to have a theme.
Well looks pretty solid from this point on, so I will proceed to the next chapter dear.
I like this prologue.
They seemed to be a little compulsive with the prioritizing.
My, my.
I like the descriptions and the bubbly way you present your main character.
I found it cute about things needing to have a theme.
Well looks pretty solid from this point on, so I will proceed to the next chapter dear.
3/1/2009 c2 22Mi.Ishi
Hm...cute, very cute.
I think you could have taken out that parentheses though. It broke up the story, and didn't add anything to it, so it seemed very unnecessary.
But otherwise, it was neat. I like how close the twins seem. Having twin brothers, I recognized the playing off each other that was going on.
Cheers,
-Shay
22Mi.IshiHm...cute, very cute.
I think you could have taken out that parentheses though. It broke up the story, and didn't add anything to it, so it seemed very unnecessary.
But otherwise, it was neat. I like how close the twins seem. Having twin brothers, I recognized the playing off each other that was going on.
Cheers,
-Shay
3/1/2009 c1 Mi.Ishi
Cute start.
It piqued my interest, writing's solid. Good prologue.
On to the next chapter.
Cheers,
-Shay
Cute start.
It piqued my interest, writing's solid. Good prologue.
On to the next chapter.
Cheers,
-Shay