7/3/2009 c1 29They Call Me Mimii
so yes I'm pretty much commenting on the majority of your writing. That's because it's really good, I severely hope you don't mind! Anywho this is excellent, I love it!

12/22/2008 c1 5Alkilas
Ok. I think this is amazing. The organization...I don't know if it was intentional, but it definitely fits the idea of the haiku.

I love how...the line that you talk about yourself is separate from the two lines about the words. It emphasizes that you are truly segregated from them.

I was so excited when I noticed that the "me" was on a new line for some reason.

Wonderful haiku!

12/20/2008 c1 half-sketched.staccatos
konban wa

Ah, what a lovely haiku. To me it makes perfect sense, actually, though I can imagine it may confuse others. :P Sometimes I just get so fed up with writing that I wish I could stop and never have to worry about editing a story or writing a chapter - ever again. But even as I try to "escape from words," I know I cannot help but crawl right back because I love it and it loves me. :)

Ha det

-Shan-