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for An Unforgettable Face

12/22/2008 c1 4Suppy
(: I do liked it, but I think you should've described the face a bit more, so we know why it was 'unforgettable'. We already know the memory behind it, but was he young? Was he old? Did he have a salt and pepper beard, that had seemed to be shaven that morning? The color of his eyes? The emotion held inside of them?

(: I like the story, don't get me wrong, love! But the description of the face would add some effect (:

Good job. ^^


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