for Knowing Ends4/16/2009 c9 
4lookingwest
I had a friend who was trying to do donuts in the school parking lot and hit a tree in a similar fashion. Good thing I wasn't with her, and good thing she didn't have a Dusk with her either, that would have made things more stressful. "You haven't been alive for very long and you're already fucking reality like a cheap whore."-best line I've read all day and I shared that one with my friends. "I need it for...my power"-if I had a dollar for all the guys who said that to me! (yeah right) Aw, I totally hope this bizarre relationship continues! I absolutely love Dusk! Not so much Theo, not sure why. Please please please continue updating this! I want to know what happens with Dusk/Theo/Fern! I beg you not to abandon it! It's sehr kuhl!
4lookingwestI had a friend who was trying to do donuts in the school parking lot and hit a tree in a similar fashion. Good thing I wasn't with her, and good thing she didn't have a Dusk with her either, that would have made things more stressful. "You haven't been alive for very long and you're already fucking reality like a cheap whore."-best line I've read all day and I shared that one with my friends. "I need it for...my power"-if I had a dollar for all the guys who said that to me! (yeah right) Aw, I totally hope this bizarre relationship continues! I absolutely love Dusk! Not so much Theo, not sure why. Please please please continue updating this! I want to know what happens with Dusk/Theo/Fern! I beg you not to abandon it! It's sehr kuhl!
2/26/2009 c8 lookingwest
aw, i like poor Dusk :( he needs a little loving too :D we should commence a love triangle eh? ehh? okay, maybe not. and it was about time for an update! i liked how this opened the characters up even more, especially Dusk. can't wait for more!
aw, i like poor Dusk :( he needs a little loving too :D we should commence a love triangle eh? ehh? okay, maybe not. and it was about time for an update! i liked how this opened the characters up even more, especially Dusk. can't wait for more!
1/21/2009 c3 ContractX
Yee! I finally got to read this again, and I still love it muchly. : )
I like the ghost. He might be my favorite so far.
Yee! I finally got to read this again, and I still love it muchly. : )
I like the ghost. He might be my favorite so far.
1/6/2009 c7 4lookingwest
Short chapters are okay some times, and for this occasion it was. The Jimmy situation fit perfectly together even if short, and it gave the characters, especially Fern, more depth. Hope you accomplish your AP Lit project successfully, that kind of thing can always be stressful!
4lookingwestShort chapters are okay some times, and for this occasion it was. The Jimmy situation fit perfectly together even if short, and it gave the characters, especially Fern, more depth. Hope you accomplish your AP Lit project successfully, that kind of thing can always be stressful!
1/6/2009 c6 lookingwest
you know, if i didn't know any better, Fern's school/your school sounds a lot like mine, lol. Except for the French, I almost had the same schedule with French replaced with German. I took AP History and AP Literature and we had to make a movie/other project for AP Lit too, lol. Anyway, I really am starting to like Dusk, I think he's funny, great character development so far! (PS. Sorry I didn't review for awhile!)
you know, if i didn't know any better, Fern's school/your school sounds a lot like mine, lol. Except for the French, I almost had the same schedule with French replaced with German. I took AP History and AP Literature and we had to make a movie/other project for AP Lit too, lol. Anyway, I really am starting to like Dusk, I think he's funny, great character development so far! (PS. Sorry I didn't review for awhile!)
12/28/2008 c5 lookingwest
ah! i was expecting some action, come on! lame Theo, RULES are meant to be broken! lolercatz on lolerskates! I like Dusk though, he seems cool. and supernatural, which is always a plus. though his personality is a little...off :D. Awaiting Tuesday!
ah! i was expecting some action, come on! lame Theo, RULES are meant to be broken! lolercatz on lolerskates! I like Dusk though, he seems cool. and supernatural, which is always a plus. though his personality is a little...off :D. Awaiting Tuesday!
12/28/2008 c4 lookingwest
So Dusk is the coolest story development to a story i've read in a long time! can't wait for chapter five!
So Dusk is the coolest story development to a story i've read in a long time! can't wait for chapter five!
12/26/2008 c1 3ContractX
Aw, the end of the chapter had a cute feel to it. And, that sucks that she pissed herself, but that element made is interesting. I like the mysteriousness of it all.
3ContractXAw, the end of the chapter had a cute feel to it. And, that sucks that she pissed herself, but that element made is interesting. I like the mysteriousness of it all.
12/23/2008 c2 lookingwest
this chapter did a good job of establishing the relationship between Fern an Leo. Fern seems like a very interesting character, and though your summary basically lays down the plot, I'm willing to see it unfold because it has yet to develop. Good chapter!
this chapter did a good job of establishing the relationship between Fern an Leo. Fern seems like a very interesting character, and though your summary basically lays down the plot, I'm willing to see it unfold because it has yet to develop. Good chapter!
12/23/2008 c1 lookingwest
this was an interesting beginning and i love your imagery of the "piss lights" and the taking-no-shit attitude of the story, haha. Your characters were introduced very quickly and the only thing that seemed off was the quick seg-way into Fern's hallucination, it just seemed like there wasn't enough description or something. But other than than, which is just a minor thing, this seems like a great beginning!
this was an interesting beginning and i love your imagery of the "piss lights" and the taking-no-shit attitude of the story, haha. Your characters were introduced very quickly and the only thing that seemed off was the quick seg-way into Fern's hallucination, it just seemed like there wasn't enough description or something. But other than than, which is just a minor thing, this seems like a great beginning!
12/21/2008 c1 brt556
This was really good.
CONTINUE POSTING, PLEASE. Seriousy.
(:
It was really entertaining.
This was really good.
CONTINUE POSTING, PLEASE. Seriousy.
(:
It was really entertaining.