
2/2/2009 c3 lulu
hm
that was hot
update
hm
that was hot
update
1/24/2009 c3
29fictionalxbliss
OH. My. God. That was AMAZING. You're awesome. I want more. Please? REALLY REALLY GOOD.

OH. My. God. That was AMAZING. You're awesome. I want more. Please? REALLY REALLY GOOD.
1/9/2009 c3 The Concept of Breathing
WOW!
OH MY WOW!
THAT, WAS AMAZING!
I actually got a visual image in my head of the whole scene. It was very well written, fantasically written!
It is a done deal, I'm in love with this story.
I just can't get over how great that scene was written. It wasn't vulgar, but it was so real and so sexy and so...WOW!
Had me thinking dirty thoughts...too much info but I couldn't help it.
BRAVO!CLAP CLAP!POST SOON!
WOW!
OH MY WOW!
THAT, WAS AMAZING!
I actually got a visual image in my head of the whole scene. It was very well written, fantasically written!
It is a done deal, I'm in love with this story.
I just can't get over how great that scene was written. It wasn't vulgar, but it was so real and so sexy and so...WOW!
Had me thinking dirty thoughts...too much info but I couldn't help it.
BRAVO!CLAP CLAP!POST SOON!
12/29/2008 c3 Anon1
Wow indeed! Some of the descriptions reminded me of my own encounters with a coworker, hehe. Hot and steamy!
Wow indeed! Some of the descriptions reminded me of my own encounters with a coworker, hehe. Hot and steamy!
12/29/2008 c3 cool
that was pretty hot. Hm... but it says your story is romance nad angst...i wonder what will happen next
that was pretty hot. Hm... but it says your story is romance nad angst...i wonder what will happen next
12/29/2008 c2 nina
this story is so good! I'll go back and review chapter 1 later!
this story is so good! I'll go back and review chapter 1 later!
12/23/2008 c2 The Concept of Breathing
IT IS A GOOD START, IT REALLY IS!
I already love brig, he sounds like my kind of guy; nice and strong and yummy.
Ooh, you must continue, I'm getting excited.
Very good story so far. I can't wait for the next post.
IT IS A GOOD START, IT REALLY IS!
I already love brig, he sounds like my kind of guy; nice and strong and yummy.
Ooh, you must continue, I'm getting excited.
Very good story so far. I can't wait for the next post.
12/23/2008 c1 The Concept of Breathing
ooh, I love it so far! I especially love Brig! Yummy strong passionate man!
ooh, I love it so far! I especially love Brig! Yummy strong passionate man!