for A French Connection1/23/2010 c1 MelodyFlame
AH every song lyric you posted i was able to hum the melody to the song as i read the lyrics :) wonderful job. But maybe give and age with this ? i don't believe i ever saw an age in this oneshot it may give it a more connected feel especially if it was their senior year and they came back to each other after university... idk your story think about it :)
AH every song lyric you posted i was able to hum the melody to the song as i read the lyrics :) wonderful job. But maybe give and age with this ? i don't believe i ever saw an age in this oneshot it may give it a more connected feel especially if it was their senior year and they came back to each other after university... idk your story think about it :)
1/22/2009 c1 
49Pinkamoo
Aw. She put her pride aside and decided to meet up with him. I like :p Good job.
49PinkamooAw. She put her pride aside and decided to meet up with him. I like :p Good job.
1/21/2009 c1 Martin'sFriendDUH
i absolutely love this story, maybe because you wrote it about me and my wishful thinking. Oh well even if it wasn't i would love!
i absolutely love this story, maybe because you wrote it about me and my wishful thinking. Oh well even if it wasn't i would love!
1/4/2009 c1 Michelle
I think this is one of my favorite stories of yours. It seems like you put a lot of thought into it. i really think the song lyrics do well in the story- not to mention I really like that Maroon 5 song. :)
Maybe you should put a few more images, more description- not of them, but of their surroundings. Talk about her sitting in her room thinking about him, and then mention what her room looks like (for example). That isn't strictly necessary, and the story is fine without it, bu it might help to flesh it out a bit.
Hmm, someone who's in French class? Who do I know that takes French? :P
I think this is one of my favorite stories of yours. It seems like you put a lot of thought into it. i really think the song lyrics do well in the story- not to mention I really like that Maroon 5 song. :)
Maybe you should put a few more images, more description- not of them, but of their surroundings. Talk about her sitting in her room thinking about him, and then mention what her room looks like (for example). That isn't strictly necessary, and the story is fine without it, bu it might help to flesh it out a bit.
Hmm, someone who's in French class? Who do I know that takes French? :P
12/29/2008 c1 u know me
luv u sweetheart!
luv u sweetheart!
12/23/2008 c1 3hyperventilating
I like this piece, the mixture of feelings beneath your words. The emotions, your words... It's beautiful. It actually seems like you're in love with Luc... Are you? ;)
3hyperventilatingI like this piece, the mixture of feelings beneath your words. The emotions, your words... It's beautiful. It actually seems like you're in love with Luc... Are you? ;)
12/22/2008 c1 13blurrylights
Oh! Is this the one for your friend?
It was so sweet..j'adore. Seriously, this is gorgeous and soo adorable!
The only thing I would say is that after the prolouge, you make it obvious that the pov changes. Other than that, awesome! :P I'm sure she liked it.
13blurrylightsOh! Is this the one for your friend?
It was so sweet..j'adore. Seriously, this is gorgeous and soo adorable!
The only thing I would say is that after the prolouge, you make it obvious that the pov changes. Other than that, awesome! :P I'm sure she liked it.
12/22/2008 c1 mygoditsm
;o
it ended so quick, (the story, that is).
really... :S can't find word (must read more).
awesome?
it's captivating, thats all I'm saying! (kind of makes me wish that you wrote more :D)
;o
it ended so quick, (the story, that is).
really... :S can't find word (must read more).
awesome?
it's captivating, thats all I'm saying! (kind of makes me wish that you wrote more :D)