for Fragments12/26/2008 c2 
1Jessie My Love
I really liked this. :]
I've never heard of that creature before, but I think you did a good job of portraying it.
So I'm assuming their stories are going to become intertwined or something? Interesting. :]
Update soon.
-Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward.
1Jessie My LoveI really liked this. :]
I've never heard of that creature before, but I think you did a good job of portraying it.
So I'm assuming their stories are going to become intertwined or something? Interesting. :]
Update soon.
-Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward.
12/23/2008 c1 Jessie My Love
Seems like an interesting story, but I'm a little confused.
It's like a twisted version of the Cain and Abel story, but I'm not sure if that was your intention or not.
Anyways, it was written rather well. :]
Update soon :]
Seems like an interesting story, but I'm a little confused.
It's like a twisted version of the Cain and Abel story, but I'm not sure if that was your intention or not.
Anyways, it was written rather well. :]
Update soon :]