for Choices3/30/2009 c10 mega
oh please oh please update this story! i don't understand why there are so few reviews, but it's really pretty interesting. i can't wait to find out what happens next!
what happened to jacob's forehead? i wonder what kind of person pamela's dad is. also, there's one thing that doesn't make sense. in the beginning, pam was in her room when jacob came home. she locked the door because she was suddenly reminded of her dad's drinking and bringing different women home... from that, i thought maybe her dad had beat her or something. some reason that would create her fear. but, then pamela said she and her dad practically ignored each other and there was no fear? how is she standing up to jacob if she was afraid before?
oh please oh please update this story! i don't understand why there are so few reviews, but it's really pretty interesting. i can't wait to find out what happens next!
what happened to jacob's forehead? i wonder what kind of person pamela's dad is. also, there's one thing that doesn't make sense. in the beginning, pam was in her room when jacob came home. she locked the door because she was suddenly reminded of her dad's drinking and bringing different women home... from that, i thought maybe her dad had beat her or something. some reason that would create her fear. but, then pamela said she and her dad practically ignored each other and there was no fear? how is she standing up to jacob if she was afraid before?
3/6/2009 c10 Spurlunk
Nice chapter, and your new title suits it more too. I wish I was good at titles, I suck at them. xP
Nice chapter, and your new title suits it more too. I wish I was good at titles, I suck at them. xP
2/14/2009 c7 
1Hateful Loving
that was pretty good! please update soon and make the chapters slightly longer! :D
HaTeFuL LoViNg
1Hateful Lovingthat was pretty good! please update soon and make the chapters slightly longer! :D
HaTeFuL LoViNg
2/8/2009 c5 11Tecna
What I enjoy the best about your stories is the way the conversations between the characters flow. Mostly it reminds me of the conversations we have, especially the 'whateva' part, seeing as that's my speciality.
Nonetheless, it's still fantastic and I'm hoping to read more. I still envy the fact that you continue to upate, whereas I'm stuck with a blimmin, writers block!
So... yeah, great chapters, update soon.
Tecna ;)
11TecnaWhat I enjoy the best about your stories is the way the conversations between the characters flow. Mostly it reminds me of the conversations we have, especially the 'whateva' part, seeing as that's my speciality.
Nonetheless, it's still fantastic and I'm hoping to read more. I still envy the fact that you continue to upate, whereas I'm stuck with a blimmin, writers block!
So... yeah, great chapters, update soon.
Tecna ;)
2/6/2009 c5 Spurlunk
Nice chapter, I'm eager to read what happens next. The title of your story is a bit strangeish though.
Nice chapter, I'm eager to read what happens next. The title of your story is a bit strangeish though.
2/3/2009 c1 Scarey
this author is obviously going to be a great hit one day
very well written, well done.
this author is obviously going to be a great hit one day
very well written, well done.
1/30/2009 c4 najat
love it love it love it cant wait 2 read da rest of it!
love it love it love it cant wait 2 read da rest of it!
1/28/2009 c4 Spurlunk
Besides my inherent bias against the name 'Pam', this story is pretty cool so far. Lots of questions left unanswered. xP
Besides my inherent bias against the name 'Pam', this story is pretty cool so far. Lots of questions left unanswered. xP