for Dreamscape8/19/2009 c1 EB
Beautiful. Absolutely gorgeous writing. loved the use of different colors throughout the poem..the rhyme scheme is quite good.. Excellent description and a great story being told..I teared up a bit while reading this poem ..no lie :D..overrall fantastic..one of the best poems I've read in a while..and it was great because it wasn't too long, and wasn't too short..the length is just right! once again well done "Jackie"!
Beautiful. Absolutely gorgeous writing. loved the use of different colors throughout the poem..the rhyme scheme is quite good.. Excellent description and a great story being told..I teared up a bit while reading this poem ..no lie :D..overrall fantastic..one of the best poems I've read in a while..and it was great because it wasn't too long, and wasn't too short..the length is just right! once again well done "Jackie"!