for Queen Bitch10/31/2018 c22 Secret.Girly.Identity
I love love love this story! Please make a sequel to this. I might die if you don't! xx 3
I love love love this story! Please make a sequel to this. I might die if you don't! xx 3
6/29/2018 c22 Guest
Hmm I didn't LOVE it but it was unique and original and a different take on a ver overused plot so kudos to u
Hmm I didn't LOVE it but it was unique and original and a different take on a ver overused plot so kudos to u
11/19/2016 c22 Guest
I'm thoroughly surprised. I came into this story thinking it's the typical story, queen bitch wanting power and stopping at nothing to get it. This feeling lasted for maybe the first three chapters and then I was blown away by the complexity of the story. I have never seen, heard or read a story such as this one. I applaud you for your ingenuity. P.S. I loved the logs that Jonathan kept. Brilliant story. I hope you get it published.
I'm thoroughly surprised. I came into this story thinking it's the typical story, queen bitch wanting power and stopping at nothing to get it. This feeling lasted for maybe the first three chapters and then I was blown away by the complexity of the story. I have never seen, heard or read a story such as this one. I applaud you for your ingenuity. P.S. I loved the logs that Jonathan kept. Brilliant story. I hope you get it published.
10/27/2015 c22 Secrets
Awwwwwwwwwww *sniffles* I don't think my heart can ever recover,
Awwwwwwwwwww *sniffles* I don't think my heart can ever recover,
10/26/2015 c14 Secrets
When casey tells jaye that she had to know that Jonathan would come to know eventually, it's supposed to be have not of.
Btw, I LOVE THIS BOOK SOOOO MUCH
When casey tells jaye that she had to know that Jonathan would come to know eventually, it's supposed to be have not of.
Btw, I LOVE THIS BOOK SOOOO MUCH
7/30/2014 c22 Guest
This was absolutely nauseating... But really really cute!
No, no.. This was completely horrendous! Utterly terrible! It was riddled with cliches and immaturity and over-the-top fluff! But then it was kind of adorable...
Oh who am I kidding... I read the entire frickin' thing while smiling like a giddy school girl and now my face muscles hurt! Damn you for writing such an amazing fic!
This was absolutely nauseating... But really really cute!
No, no.. This was completely horrendous! Utterly terrible! It was riddled with cliches and immaturity and over-the-top fluff! But then it was kind of adorable...
Oh who am I kidding... I read the entire frickin' thing while smiling like a giddy school girl and now my face muscles hurt! Damn you for writing such an amazing fic!
7/17/2014 c4 
10Be My Valentine
Kaitling punching her in the face *gasps for breath, can't breathe*
This story is so much fun right now, I can't tell you. (Well I can, but...)
10Be My ValentineKaitling punching her in the face *gasps for breath, can't breathe*
This story is so much fun right now, I can't tell you. (Well I can, but...)
7/17/2014 c3 Be My Valentine
What? What what what?
Did Steve and Adrian just get hot and heavy in the storage room? *shrieks*
Uh-oh, Jaye might've been rumbled by Jonathon there. We'll see
What? What what what?
Did Steve and Adrian just get hot and heavy in the storage room? *shrieks*
Uh-oh, Jaye might've been rumbled by Jonathon there. We'll see
7/17/2014 c2 Be My Valentine
Omg! You were so right. I was so confused when Elliot was 1st mentioned, but then you went on to explain he's in a civil partnership with David! How amazeballs :)
Oh, haha. How awkward. She talks to her dad (like saying Tristan wants to fuck a slutty girl) like he's not her parent or something. I wouldn't dream of speaking to my dad about things like that XP Especially with that language!
Also enjoyed the Tristan encounter at the coffee place.
Gr8 chapter. Looking forward to more!
Omg! You were so right. I was so confused when Elliot was 1st mentioned, but then you went on to explain he's in a civil partnership with David! How amazeballs :)
Oh, haha. How awkward. She talks to her dad (like saying Tristan wants to fuck a slutty girl) like he's not her parent or something. I wouldn't dream of speaking to my dad about things like that XP Especially with that language!
Also enjoyed the Tristan encounter at the coffee place.
Gr8 chapter. Looking forward to more!
7/17/2014 c1 Be My Valentine
This first chapter is freaking AWESOME.
I don't care...it's that good. You just turned the "Queen Bitch" trope on its head!
Loved the humour.
Loved the different perspective!
You're right - nearly every high school story has one thing in common. It's nice to see things from her side for a while! XP
This first chapter is freaking AWESOME.
I don't care...it's that good. You just turned the "Queen Bitch" trope on its head!
Loved the humour.
Loved the different perspective!
You're right - nearly every high school story has one thing in common. It's nice to see things from her side for a while! XP
6/21/2014 c22 Trillpuv
Crying because love and fourth wall breakage. 3333333 I cannot express how beautiful this fic is.
Crying because love and fourth wall breakage. 3333333 I cannot express how beautiful this fic is.
6/11/2014 c22 000001111
I loved this story so much! It was quite refreshing to me after reading tons of fluff and sort of predictable fiction, and I thank you for your wonderful contribution to Fictionpress. You really made my day great! :)
I loved this story so much! It was quite refreshing to me after reading tons of fluff and sort of predictable fiction, and I thank you for your wonderful contribution to Fictionpress. You really made my day great! :)