
11/6/2009 c1
11R. Lauden
I know this is an old story, but I picked it for being the longest one. Absolutely love it! You definately don't spare any of the details, which contributes to the ultimate awsomeness. I actually read it all the way through without skipping over paragraphs... which I do when writing makes me bored.
SO... that means this is superb.
R.

I know this is an old story, but I picked it for being the longest one. Absolutely love it! You definately don't spare any of the details, which contributes to the ultimate awsomeness. I actually read it all the way through without skipping over paragraphs... which I do when writing makes me bored.
SO... that means this is superb.
R.
10/27/2009 c1 haley
oh my gosh... this is so tragic. i really like your use of imagery twoard the end. great job taylor(: keep it up. you have a big future ahead of you. i love you girl(:
i promise i will post my stuff on here veryy soon
with love,,
haley
oh my gosh... this is so tragic. i really like your use of imagery twoard the end. great job taylor(: keep it up. you have a big future ahead of you. i love you girl(:
i promise i will post my stuff on here veryy soon
with love,,
haley
3/11/2009 c1
26Sick.or.Sane
oh my goodness taylor madison u MUST update soon! i go to school with you! i'll get you lol jk

oh my goodness taylor madison u MUST update soon! i go to school with you! i'll get you lol jk
2/26/2009 c1
1Inmortal Luz De La Luna
O.O wow that was good. Update as soon as you can! I have to see what happens next!

O.O wow that was good. Update as soon as you can! I have to see what happens next!
2/21/2009 c1
2Ray-Anne
Strong strong beginning. Very ... almost creepy. It was gripping. Disappointing if it isn't updated. But all the same. You do have immense talent.

Strong strong beginning. Very ... almost creepy. It was gripping. Disappointing if it isn't updated. But all the same. You do have immense talent.
2/14/2009 c1 songbirdalice
hello taylor! its katie and i love this story! i will say it is a bit um...graphic buts its really good, i can't wait till you update this! LUV YOU!
hello taylor! its katie and i love this story! i will say it is a bit um...graphic buts its really good, i can't wait till you update this! LUV YOU!
1/1/2009 c1 The Concept of Breathing
amazing, I love it. Hannah still rubs me the wrong way but im guessing she has her reasons. And I have to admit, I kind of like Bobby; there's just something about sweaty men fighting that gets me ;]
Post soon.
You're very welcome, I didn't have to do much of anything. Your writing is amazing all by itself.
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
amazing, I love it. Hannah still rubs me the wrong way but im guessing she has her reasons. And I have to admit, I kind of like Bobby; there's just something about sweaty men fighting that gets me ;]
Post soon.
You're very welcome, I didn't have to do much of anything. Your writing is amazing all by itself.
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
12/29/2008 c1
1OnceUponATimeThisWasMyAccount
Wow. I have to say; alot happened in that chapter!
And I absolutely detest your protagonist. What a bl*ody bitch! But... I guess you wanted it to be that way?
I kind of hope so, anyway...
It was, um, very graphic... I see what you mean when you say you like steam... Would I be correct in guessing that "Breaking Dawn" is your favourite Twilight series novel? Lmao, sorry... Must be serious...
Ok. Seriousness.
I can't wait to see the next chapter, but I think if you;ve got writer's block on this story, planning ahead for a sequeal is going a little bit far. But you know, whatever, I guess... if it's what you want to do, I suppose all I can say is "go for it".
It's was pacy, and it was interesting. Hannah's a bitch. But whatever. More soon?

Wow. I have to say; alot happened in that chapter!
And I absolutely detest your protagonist. What a bl*ody bitch! But... I guess you wanted it to be that way?
I kind of hope so, anyway...
It was, um, very graphic... I see what you mean when you say you like steam... Would I be correct in guessing that "Breaking Dawn" is your favourite Twilight series novel? Lmao, sorry... Must be serious...
Ok. Seriousness.
I can't wait to see the next chapter, but I think if you;ve got writer's block on this story, planning ahead for a sequeal is going a little bit far. But you know, whatever, I guess... if it's what you want to do, I suppose all I can say is "go for it".
It's was pacy, and it was interesting. Hannah's a bitch. But whatever. More soon?