for You'll Never Know12/27/2008 c1 
103Jesse the Storyteller
I don't like the underlining. It's unnecessary and tacky. o.O
This poem as a whole was decently good, though. Sort of harrowing, with the repetition and the way that it's speaking of something that is emotionally strong but isn't explained. Mysterious. Nice!
-Jesse
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103Jesse the StorytellerI don't like the underlining. It's unnecessary and tacky. o.O
This poem as a whole was decently good, though. Sort of harrowing, with the repetition and the way that it's speaking of something that is emotionally strong but isn't explained. Mysterious. Nice!
-Jesse
Attack of the review marathon! (link in profile)