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for Respired Melody

12/28/2008 c1 31Cindy Moon
I liked the momentum this poem had, it reflects the musical quality of the metaphor. I'm definitely a fan of your work and am impressed with your rather reliable updates, unlike my own.

-Cindy Moon *)
12/27/2008 c1 8LostInMe
I like the way you started with "inhale exhale inhale exhale" and then ended with it (I know, there's another line after it, but it's still towards the end). I also noticed your lack of commas, or any punctuation for that matter (except in one line). Both of these things really add to the effectiveness of the poem. Good work!

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