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1/21/2009 c1 25VictorInChrist
Very nicely written. Putting a profound truth into a simple poem. I love when I find that! Good job, I see why you had a hard time giving it a title.:)
12/28/2008 c1 14its.Nothing.Special
"I will bring the blind by a way they did not know; I will lead them in paths they have not known. I will make darkness light before them, And crooked places straight. These things I will do for them, And not forsake them." (Isaiah 42:16)

This was just gorgeous and uplifting. I kind of like the stark dissonance in the beginning; we are that way with our eyes closed, we are that way without Christ. Loved the last lines, loved how this shows that it's not us, it's all God.

Keep writing!


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