for Descriptions9/5/2009 c1 
173Little girl Big world
These are all wonderful descriptions! I like the lines,
"Eyes of melted honey."
&
"Lips as red as sunburn."
The ending was perfect and I like how you repeated the first stanza.
Well done :)
173Little girl Big worldThese are all wonderful descriptions! I like the lines,
"Eyes of melted honey."
&
"Lips as red as sunburn."
The ending was perfect and I like how you repeated the first stanza.
Well done :)