for Hide and Seek8/24/2009 c11 Cynthia
ohh this sounds interesting! Poor Speed, he just got away from a killer and now he's seeing a ghost... who seems to want to talk to him a lot xD. can't wait to read more of this!
ohh this sounds interesting! Poor Speed, he just got away from a killer and now he's seeing a ghost... who seems to want to talk to him a lot xD. can't wait to read more of this!
8/24/2009 c10 Cynthia
Hi, first I'm so sorry that I stopped reading after chapter 18... I feel really bad about it! Got a lot to do and couldn't catch up. Anyway, I want to tell you how much I loved this... police novels are my favourites and this one is really good. I'm sure you'll do an amazing job while editing it and adding some stuff.
Good job, hun!
Hi, first I'm so sorry that I stopped reading after chapter 18... I feel really bad about it! Got a lot to do and couldn't catch up. Anyway, I want to tell you how much I loved this... police novels are my favourites and this one is really good. I'm sure you'll do an amazing job while editing it and adding some stuff.
Good job, hun!
8/20/2009 c27 RosesBelikov
AW! I LOVE IT! I can't wait for you to get this published. I will SO buy it. ;D
AW! I LOVE IT! I can't wait for you to get this published. I will SO buy it. ;D
8/20/2009 c28 
8LaGrid
omg, i'm so glad i managed to read the whole thing before it was taken down! :) wow...i hadn't realised i was working with a time limit there...lol
as thrillers go, this is pretty high. serial killers mindsets used to fascinate me too...but then i realised they probably turned out that way becoz either a) they had an unhappy childhood b) were mentally unhinged c) had freaky obsessions.
I liked this story. I'm REALLY glad this serial killer didn't turn out to be some handsome, young, rakish fellow that she falls hopelessly in love with. No...*sarcasm* That it just plain...wrong! :):)
much love
x
8LaGridomg, i'm so glad i managed to read the whole thing before it was taken down! :) wow...i hadn't realised i was working with a time limit there...lol
as thrillers go, this is pretty high. serial killers mindsets used to fascinate me too...but then i realised they probably turned out that way becoz either a) they had an unhappy childhood b) were mentally unhinged c) had freaky obsessions.
I liked this story. I'm REALLY glad this serial killer didn't turn out to be some handsome, young, rakish fellow that she falls hopelessly in love with. No...*sarcasm* That it just plain...wrong! :):)
much love
x
8/17/2009 c28 onyxcullen
I've been reading this story from the beginning and I loved it the whole way. (: You're an amazing author. This story was great.
I've been reading this story from the beginning and I loved it the whole way. (: You're an amazing author. This story was great.
8/17/2009 c28 Onyx1901
Oh my god! This is amazing! I absolutely love Speed! The fact that he gets his own story is amazing.
I think the girl is Alex's sister?
Well, when you said that it includes Adam more than Alex, I figured it was Adam's sister! But then he said "Because your dead!" and the only person I can think of that he would know by sight and KNOW is dead is Alex's sister. Maybe he saw a picture?
But then if it was Adam's sister, does he even know what she looks
But maybe he is just super smart, and put together that since Alex didn't say anything about her, she's DEFINITELY dead. Lol
I have no clue. Can't Wait to find out though!
Oh my god! This is amazing! I absolutely love Speed! The fact that he gets his own story is amazing.
I think the girl is Alex's sister?
Well, when you said that it includes Adam more than Alex, I figured it was Adam's sister! But then he said "Because your dead!" and the only person I can think of that he would know by sight and KNOW is dead is Alex's sister. Maybe he saw a picture?
But then if it was Adam's sister, does he even know what she looks
But maybe he is just super smart, and put together that since Alex didn't say anything about her, she's DEFINITELY dead. Lol
I have no clue. Can't Wait to find out though!
8/16/2009 c27 Gaabbysss
aw I'm crying, this was a really good history! Thank you so much for this! kiss
Gaby's
aw I'm crying, this was a really good history! Thank you so much for this! kiss
Gaby's
8/15/2009 c27 Onyx1901
Oh my god. I can't believe it's really over! I KNEW IT WAS BRADSHAW! I knew it from the beginning, god dammit!
" 'You hate guns.' 'I hate you more.' BOOM!"
BEST. LINE. EVER.
This story has been amazing. I still can't believe it's over.
And you know what? I hate mystery/cop stories, but this was one of the best stories I've read.
I will be at the bookstore at midnight when this gets published!
Oh my god. I can't believe it's really over! I KNEW IT WAS BRADSHAW! I knew it from the beginning, god dammit!
" 'You hate guns.' 'I hate you more.' BOOM!"
BEST. LINE. EVER.
This story has been amazing. I still can't believe it's over.
And you know what? I hate mystery/cop stories, but this was one of the best stories I've read.
I will be at the bookstore at midnight when this gets published!
8/14/2009 c27 RoseBelikov18
Janey, that was amazing! I LOVED it! =D You did a wonderful job! I don't think you'll have a problem at all with getting it published. =)
-RoseBelikov18
Janey, that was amazing! I LOVED it! =D You did a wonderful job! I don't think you'll have a problem at all with getting it published. =)
-RoseBelikov18
8/14/2009 c27 Kathey27
! He's awake !
!ADAMxALEX!
I love this story so much! It had romance, suspense, action and lots of humor. This was amazing and I really hope you publish. When u do, let us know : ).
! He's awake !
!ADAMxALEX!
I love this story so much! It had romance, suspense, action and lots of humor. This was amazing and I really hope you publish. When u do, let us know : ).