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1/1/2009 c2 1inthedeepeningshade
Gosh, I love, love, love, love, love this story. So very, very much. I loved it when Speed called her asshole, for some reason. Don't ask me why, lol! This is just so awesome. I can't stand it. Though it was really strange of Reynolds to be stalking her. Maybe he's the killer...

Btw, there's a too/to mistake right after "9:20."
12/31/2008 c1 inthedeepeningshade
Well, hello. 'Tis me, LaLaLovely47 from fanfictionland.

And, I must admit, I am seriously intrigued by this story! I like it a whole lot, and it's pretty well written, if I do say so myself. The only qualm I have is that maybe you gave everything away too soon, like letting us figure out Alex's secret in the first chapter (hey, I don't mind at all, but if you're trying to get this published, it might help to drag it out for a chapter or two). I mean, obviously we don't know everything that happened, but we got a pretty good idea.

Anywayss, I love this a whole lot. Did I mention how much I liked it? Off to the next chapter.

P.S. I love Speed. There's a romance budding, I hope!
12/30/2008 c4 blah248
great chapter.
12/29/2008 c3 blah248
its good.

im getting goosebumps...
12/29/2008 c2 blah248
lol

the ending was funny(:

cant wait for more
12/29/2008 c1 blah248
its good so far!
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