for Hide and Seek1/1/2009 c2 
1inthedeepeningshade
Gosh, I love, love, love, love, love this story. So very, very much. I loved it when Speed called her asshole, for some reason. Don't ask me why, lol! This is just so awesome. I can't stand it. Though it was really strange of Reynolds to be stalking her. Maybe he's the killer...
Btw, there's a too/to mistake right after "9:20."
1inthedeepeningshadeGosh, I love, love, love, love, love this story. So very, very much. I loved it when Speed called her asshole, for some reason. Don't ask me why, lol! This is just so awesome. I can't stand it. Though it was really strange of Reynolds to be stalking her. Maybe he's the killer...
Btw, there's a too/to mistake right after "9:20."
12/31/2008 c1 inthedeepeningshade
Well, hello. 'Tis me, LaLaLovely47 from fanfictionland.
And, I must admit, I am seriously intrigued by this story! I like it a whole lot, and it's pretty well written, if I do say so myself. The only qualm I have is that maybe you gave everything away too soon, like letting us figure out Alex's secret in the first chapter (hey, I don't mind at all, but if you're trying to get this published, it might help to drag it out for a chapter or two). I mean, obviously we don't know everything that happened, but we got a pretty good idea.
Anywayss, I love this a whole lot. Did I mention how much I liked it? Off to the next chapter.
P.S. I love Speed. There's a romance budding, I hope!
Well, hello. 'Tis me, LaLaLovely47 from fanfictionland.
And, I must admit, I am seriously intrigued by this story! I like it a whole lot, and it's pretty well written, if I do say so myself. The only qualm I have is that maybe you gave everything away too soon, like letting us figure out Alex's secret in the first chapter (hey, I don't mind at all, but if you're trying to get this published, it might help to drag it out for a chapter or two). I mean, obviously we don't know everything that happened, but we got a pretty good idea.
Anywayss, I love this a whole lot. Did I mention how much I liked it? Off to the next chapter.
P.S. I love Speed. There's a romance budding, I hope!