for Hide and Seek7/27/2009 c21 dragonfly-009
Yeah, short chapter - but a good one! I'm glad they're getting somewhere, and the new Adam was a fresh piece of personality that goes well with the rest of his character (if that makes any sense).
The concept of Alex always being a scared little girl didn't seem to connect with what I had as an image of her, though. I think she might have been portrayed as a person who, despite a traumatic past with unanswered questions, was still able to feel comfortable in her favourite chair with a pile of stories to read through. But then again, maybe I should just go read the first few chapters once more...
Yeah, short chapter - but a good one! I'm glad they're getting somewhere, and the new Adam was a fresh piece of personality that goes well with the rest of his character (if that makes any sense).
The concept of Alex always being a scared little girl didn't seem to connect with what I had as an image of her, though. I think she might have been portrayed as a person who, despite a traumatic past with unanswered questions, was still able to feel comfortable in her favourite chair with a pile of stories to read through. But then again, maybe I should just go read the first few chapters once more...
7/26/2009 c9 Kathey27
I'm getting really freaked out. Lol :) this story's going awesome and I can't wait to be able to read it again as an actual book :)
I'm getting really freaked out. Lol :) this story's going awesome and I can't wait to be able to read it again as an actual book :)
7/26/2009 c7 Kathey27
how dare she even suggest that the kiss was nothing! But on the bright side, no more creepy Brittany, lol, :D
how dare she even suggest that the kiss was nothing! But on the bright side, no more creepy Brittany, lol, :D
7/26/2009 c4 Kathey27
I want Speed. And Adam is so great :D and just to help keep this interesting, I'm going to pretend I haven't already read this all, lol, makes me more excited when certain things happen. Weird, I know :)
I want Speed. And Adam is so great :D and just to help keep this interesting, I'm going to pretend I haven't already read this all, lol, makes me more excited when certain things happen. Weird, I know :)