for Hide and Seek2/25/2009 c17 quackerrox
DAMN DAMN DAMN. The last scene was so sexy.
You totally need to write more ;D
DAMN DAMN DAMN. The last scene was so sexy.
You totally need to write more ;D
2/21/2009 c17 dragonfly-009
... wow...
uh okay, I guess I didn't find any spelling mistakes there... Who am I kidding? That was a great chapter! I couldn't be bothered looking for the spelling mistakes as soon as I hit the line "She opened the door and came face to face with Adam." LOL I knew he'd be angry! And I was pretty sure it'd end up with them kissing, I just didn't predict it going that far! You were right, it was a BIG chapter! Hahaa I just realised something - they didn't close the door! What if the next chapter begins with "Speed froze in shock, then crash-tackled Reynolds" LOL or her mum realised she forgot to tell Alex something and quickly did a U-turn LOL I'm too busy laughing like a maniac now XD
... wow...
uh okay, I guess I didn't find any spelling mistakes there... Who am I kidding? That was a great chapter! I couldn't be bothered looking for the spelling mistakes as soon as I hit the line "She opened the door and came face to face with Adam." LOL I knew he'd be angry! And I was pretty sure it'd end up with them kissing, I just didn't predict it going that far! You were right, it was a BIG chapter! Hahaa I just realised something - they didn't close the door! What if the next chapter begins with "Speed froze in shock, then crash-tackled Reynolds" LOL or her mum realised she forgot to tell Alex something and quickly did a U-turn LOL I'm too busy laughing like a maniac now XD
2/15/2009 c16 
11Sakiru Yume
This was a great story. It took me forever to read, because I kept on forgetting about it (sorry), but I really liked it. Please try to write more soon. Thanks.
11Sakiru YumeThis was a great story. It took me forever to read, because I kept on forgetting about it (sorry), but I really liked it. Please try to write more soon. Thanks.
2/9/2009 c16 MrsStevenWalters
I just went to click on the next button and I am at the end of the book? What the hell! I want more, this is great. Keep up the good work and look forward to reading more and buying the book.
I just went to click on the next button and I am at the end of the book? What the hell! I want more, this is great. Keep up the good work and look forward to reading more and buying the book.
2/8/2009 c5 dragonfly-009 -from fanfiction
Argh! I had a little premonition that something bad would happen as soon as Reynolds left, but I didn't think the guy would get inside her HOUSE! And what's even worse is that I've never read a story where the protagonist shared my name, and it makes it a whole lot scarier! Thank goodness you didn't write it in 1st person... But it only makes the story more REAL (not that it's not real in the first place) and I like it more :D
Only one spelling mistake, somewhere around the middle of the chapter - "It was hard to imagine that he fear switch would just flip" yeah, if you're able to change that then you'll need to before you send it off to the publishers.
Argh! I had a little premonition that something bad would happen as soon as Reynolds left, but I didn't think the guy would get inside her HOUSE! And what's even worse is that I've never read a story where the protagonist shared my name, and it makes it a whole lot scarier! Thank goodness you didn't write it in 1st person... But it only makes the story more REAL (not that it's not real in the first place) and I like it more :D
Only one spelling mistake, somewhere around the middle of the chapter - "It was hard to imagine that he fear switch would just flip" yeah, if you're able to change that then you'll need to before you send it off to the publishers.
2/8/2009 c4 dragonfly-009 -from fanfiction
Well, I guess Reynolds' clinginess paid off a little, in this chapter. And what did the note-dropper mean by "if you had gone to camp in the first place"? Meh, I guess I'll find out soon enough.
I like the way the story's progressing. Just a random guess, but did Reynolds kill his sister by accident? I know you're not going to tell me, but that's where my thoughts are headed at this point of the story.
Well, I guess Reynolds' clinginess paid off a little, in this chapter. And what did the note-dropper mean by "if you had gone to camp in the first place"? Meh, I guess I'll find out soon enough.
I like the way the story's progressing. Just a random guess, but did Reynolds kill his sister by accident? I know you're not going to tell me, but that's where my thoughts are headed at this point of the story.
2/8/2009 c3 dragonfly-009 -from fanfiction
Hahahaha I really do like Speed, I'm guessing he's also the main portion of comedic relief? But I also tend to side with him in regards to Reynolds - the detective seems to be a LITTLE too... in the way? Always around? I don't know, he comes off as a little clingy, whatever his justifications are.
The story's going somewhere! I really hate it when the author gets too caught up in description and flashbacks to continue with the present time of the story, but the plot's moving in this one! Yay for Feefalla!
Hahahaha I really do like Speed, I'm guessing he's also the main portion of comedic relief? But I also tend to side with him in regards to Reynolds - the detective seems to be a LITTLE too... in the way? Always around? I don't know, he comes off as a little clingy, whatever his justifications are.
The story's going somewhere! I really hate it when the author gets too caught up in description and flashbacks to continue with the present time of the story, but the plot's moving in this one! Yay for Feefalla!
2/8/2009 c2 dragonfly-009 -from fanfiction
Hahahaha! I love this protagonist WAY more than Bella, Alex recognises that it's creepy when a guy she just met starts following her everywhere! And I like Speed, and Alex's attitude towards his 'usage' of women. Just a check - is this story/book/novel finished? Is chapter 16 the last one?
Hahahaha! I love this protagonist WAY more than Bella, Alex recognises that it's creepy when a guy she just met starts following her everywhere! And I like Speed, and Alex's attitude towards his 'usage' of women. Just a check - is this story/book/novel finished? Is chapter 16 the last one?
2/8/2009 c1 dragonfly-009 -from fanfiction
I already love this story! Especially since my name is Alexandra (Alex for short) and my best friend of 13 years constantly calls me Lex in a sing-song voice, and I always reply to him with "Don't call me Lex"! I have never had a protagonist relate to me so much! (besides the whole murder/trauma thing... I can't say I've been through that) And also the same hermit-like hobby, I guess - constantly reading - but I just like reading, I don't do it for work.
I will now proceed with this story :D quite happily
I already love this story! Especially since my name is Alexandra (Alex for short) and my best friend of 13 years constantly calls me Lex in a sing-song voice, and I always reply to him with "Don't call me Lex"! I have never had a protagonist relate to me so much! (besides the whole murder/trauma thing... I can't say I've been through that) And also the same hermit-like hobby, I guess - constantly reading - but I just like reading, I don't do it for work.
I will now proceed with this story :D quite happily
2/6/2009 c16 1inthedeepeningshade
Oh my god, are all of these guys rich because the real killer is paying them all off? Maybe to frame the dude they all worked with? Humm...I'm either getting warmer or am completely off base...
...anyways, I continue to enjoy this story. I'm still extremely intrigued by it, and keeps getting more and more interesting with each passing chapter. Please watch your punctuation, though! I'd swear you'd never seen a question mark by how you end some of your sentences. Otherwise, of course, I freaking lurrvvee it!
1inthedeepeningshadeOh my god, are all of these guys rich because the real killer is paying them all off? Maybe to frame the dude they all worked with? Humm...I'm either getting warmer or am completely off base...
...anyways, I continue to enjoy this story. I'm still extremely intrigued by it, and keeps getting more and more interesting with each passing chapter. Please watch your punctuation, though! I'd swear you'd never seen a question mark by how you end some of your sentences. Otherwise, of course, I freaking lurrvvee it!