for The Wolf that Loved a Deer1/28/2013 c2 Guest
Wow wow wow! I love this story so far! I love the way you write, I feel like I'm actually in the story! I loved the part where Edik is trying to hug her, and she is scared. I can feel how tense she is and creeped out! Amazing! I don't know what's going to happen next, and it says that this story isn't completed. I hope you will finish this, it's too good to leave unfinished! Great work!
Wow wow wow! I love this story so far! I love the way you write, I feel like I'm actually in the story! I loved the part where Edik is trying to hug her, and she is scared. I can feel how tense she is and creeped out! Amazing! I don't know what's going to happen next, and it says that this story isn't completed. I hope you will finish this, it's too good to leave unfinished! Great work!
2/8/2010 c10 KittyKatLover
Cute! Very, very cute! I just found your story and I like it so far. If you could though, try not to bold the entire chapter, it gets a bit annoying.
Update soon please!
Cute! Very, very cute! I just found your story and I like it so far. If you could though, try not to bold the entire chapter, it gets a bit annoying.
Update soon please!
2/3/2010 c10 
6letyoursoultakeflight
It was probably just a maid, and she was going to look like an absolute nut bag when she was inevitably discovered.
- hehe, nice =]
Aww, I reall like the characters you have created!
6letyoursoultakeflightIt was probably just a maid, and she was going to look like an absolute nut bag when she was inevitably discovered.
- hehe, nice =]
Aww, I reall like the characters you have created!
1/23/2010 c9 letyoursoultakeflight
fluttering mix of pain and safety
-love that bit =]
What was she supposed to do when she remembered a love that once lived, but didn’t anymore?
- Aw! No!
fluttering mix of pain and safety
-love that bit =]
What was she supposed to do when she remembered a love that once lived, but didn’t anymore?
- Aw! No!
10/26/2009 c6 letyoursoultakeflight
The only thing they both knew for certain was that they loved each other in a way that changed everything.
- so beautiful!
And WOW, this is my favourite chapter! Its so powerful, especially with Mother Nature being so vocal... poor darlings!
The only thing they both knew for certain was that they loved each other in a way that changed everything.
- so beautiful!
And WOW, this is my favourite chapter! Its so powerful, especially with Mother Nature being so vocal... poor darlings!
10/26/2009 c4 letyoursoultakeflight
Beauty, and lines, and architecture were all at once overwhelmingly perfect to her.
- this character has taste! :)
Beauty, and lines, and architecture were all at once overwhelmingly perfect to her.
- this character has taste! :)
10/26/2009 c1 letyoursoultakeflight
Excellent begining! Mirabella recomended me this one and I cannot wait to get stuck into it!
Excellent begining! Mirabella recomended me this one and I cannot wait to get stuck into it!
10/18/2009 c8 17mousegirl05
'Ello again! I enjoyed this chapter too. ^_^ And thank you for the shout-out. *Blushes* Anyway, this chapter was so sweet and awkward and sorta funny because of that. I feel so bad for Edik because all he wants is her and she's just not ready for it. *laughs* Poor guy. The formatting business at the very end of the chapter was a little distracting-might want to see about getting it fixed for the easily flustered (like myself) *laughs* Readers are picky, aren't they? ^_~ I vote for the cliche or the epic cliche! Of course, I'm sure the sad twist would be beautiful... but uhm... sad. *laughs* Cheers!
17mousegirl05'Ello again! I enjoyed this chapter too. ^_^ And thank you for the shout-out. *Blushes* Anyway, this chapter was so sweet and awkward and sorta funny because of that. I feel so bad for Edik because all he wants is her and she's just not ready for it. *laughs* Poor guy. The formatting business at the very end of the chapter was a little distracting-might want to see about getting it fixed for the easily flustered (like myself) *laughs* Readers are picky, aren't they? ^_~ I vote for the cliche or the epic cliche! Of course, I'm sure the sad twist would be beautiful... but uhm... sad. *laughs* Cheers!