for My father made me to kill but fate made me to love7/3/2010 c1 
4Lula9167
I'm new at fictionpress. I found out about this site through fanfiction. I read your story and I love it. I think it would be a little bit easier to read it if you divided it in several chapters and give more space to the writting. But otherwise I love Adelina and Demetri characters and how they grow to love each other. I'm not sure if I understood well the ending both characters died or is just and open end for us to imagine them as pair of vampires loving each other. I mean they are still persecuted by the Vampire king. You can make a sequel. You got talent.
4Lula9167I'm new at fictionpress. I found out about this site through fanfiction. I read your story and I love it. I think it would be a little bit easier to read it if you divided it in several chapters and give more space to the writting. But otherwise I love Adelina and Demetri characters and how they grow to love each other. I'm not sure if I understood well the ending both characters died or is just and open end for us to imagine them as pair of vampires loving each other. I mean they are still persecuted by the Vampire king. You can make a sequel. You got talent.
8/3/2009 c1 A-Cup-Of-Air
You have wrote a really good story! This was the first story, what I have read in fictiopress or fanfiction, when I cried in the end. The ending was brilliant, but I was so sad...
I don't get why you had only 3 reviews before me! But I loved it. I liked both Demetri and Daniel, they were really kind.
Maybe you should have made the story in more chapters? I don't know... But it was great!
You have wrote a really good story! This was the first story, what I have read in fictiopress or fanfiction, when I cried in the end. The ending was brilliant, but I was so sad...
I don't get why you had only 3 reviews before me! But I loved it. I liked both Demetri and Daniel, they were really kind.
Maybe you should have made the story in more chapters? I don't know... But it was great!
4/4/2009 c1 jazziee
Omg! This story was amazing! I think that it was awesome but it is kind of sad at the end. :( But other than that it was amazing.
Omg! This story was amazing! I think that it was awesome but it is kind of sad at the end. :( But other than that it was amazing.
1/1/2009 c1 22DarknessQueen12
Even though it took me a long time to read this. I must say I really really enjoyed reading it. Even though it was long it was extremely good!
22DarknessQueen12Even though it took me a long time to read this. I must say I really really enjoyed reading it. Even though it was long it was extremely good!