for Rough Petals10/5/2009 c14 
22Starleaf
This gets better and better. First off, I LOVED these lines...
Sybil was obviously enjoying the blank stares. “I want to sleep with Cole!” She shouted. Everyone’s eyes turned to her now. “I want to sleep with everybody! Sleepover!” She banged her little fists against the table.
Absolutely ADORABLE!
Secondly, it's amazing how alien Joss is in this story. I didn't really like her at first in SWTE, but she grew on me immensely, to the point where I really felt for her. Now... being in Charlie's shoes, it almost seems like she's a totally different person. It's weird.
Loving this! Great job.
22StarleafThis gets better and better. First off, I LOVED these lines...
Sybil was obviously enjoying the blank stares. “I want to sleep with Cole!” She shouted. Everyone’s eyes turned to her now. “I want to sleep with everybody! Sleepover!” She banged her little fists against the table.
Absolutely ADORABLE!
Secondly, it's amazing how alien Joss is in this story. I didn't really like her at first in SWTE, but she grew on me immensely, to the point where I really felt for her. Now... being in Charlie's shoes, it almost seems like she's a totally different person. It's weird.
Loving this! Great job.
10/4/2009 c4 Starleaf
Just to let you know (though I'm sure someone has alerted you to this already), you can right click "colour" when it's underlined in red and choose to add it to your dictionary so it doesn't correct it anymore.
I love Cole. I'm so glad you continued with him. This is going pretty well so far, and I'm warming up to Charlie!
Just to let you know (though I'm sure someone has alerted you to this already), you can right click "colour" when it's underlined in red and choose to add it to your dictionary so it doesn't correct it anymore.
I love Cole. I'm so glad you continued with him. This is going pretty well so far, and I'm warming up to Charlie!
10/4/2009 c2 Starleaf
Okay, I know my reviews aren't very constructive, but I must say this: I KNEW you watched Sex and the City. Rofl. I noticed little things in the last story. I pick up on little details like that...
Love it. Anyway, love the story so far. But I still can't see him with someone other than Joss. Reading on!
Okay, I know my reviews aren't very constructive, but I must say this: I KNEW you watched Sex and the City. Rofl. I noticed little things in the last story. I pick up on little details like that...
Love it. Anyway, love the story so far. But I still can't see him with someone other than Joss. Reading on!
10/4/2009 c1 Starleaf
WOW. I'm slow. You'd think the starbucks gift card, the green eyes, the dark hair, SOMETHING would tip me off that it was Cole, but I never saw Cole as a gross drunk guy, so I didn't expect it to be him...
I can't see him in love with anyone other than Joss.. :(
I'm excited to see what happens! *keeps reading*
WOW. I'm slow. You'd think the starbucks gift card, the green eyes, the dark hair, SOMETHING would tip me off that it was Cole, but I never saw Cole as a gross drunk guy, so I didn't expect it to be him...
I can't see him in love with anyone other than Joss.. :(
I'm excited to see what happens! *keeps reading*
9/29/2009 c24 Ema Marsel
So I stayed up till 5 in the morning reading this fiction. I was looking for something amazing, and well I stumbled over this C2, I do not normally look at these. Then I saw your story, started reading it and remembered your little character Sybil...
Then I thought
And thought
And thought
Guess what I realized... Bet you can guess. HA I read your fiction about Joss, Jack, Cole and all of your amazing characters. Then I think I lost the link because I didn't remember the ending.
I loved this story. It made me laugh out loud so many times. Sybil, the keys scene in the epilogue more like a prologue, and other random times.
I just have one thing to ask. Will you write my life. I think it would be fascinating!
So I stayed up till 5 in the morning reading this fiction. I was looking for something amazing, and well I stumbled over this C2, I do not normally look at these. Then I saw your story, started reading it and remembered your little character Sybil...
Then I thought
And thought
And thought
Guess what I realized... Bet you can guess. HA I read your fiction about Joss, Jack, Cole and all of your amazing characters. Then I think I lost the link because I didn't remember the ending.
I loved this story. It made me laugh out loud so many times. Sybil, the keys scene in the epilogue more like a prologue, and other random times.
I just have one thing to ask. Will you write my life. I think it would be fascinating!
9/26/2009 c24 3ShadowBrilliance
I loved this story! WRITE MORE! Lolrotf, anyways, I loved every word of this story, I might even say that it was a bit better than SWTE. :) Maybe. Lolrotf, anyways, when you have time, check out my story, and reveiw!
3ShadowBrillianceI loved this story! WRITE MORE! Lolrotf, anyways, I loved every word of this story, I might even say that it was a bit better than SWTE. :) Maybe. Lolrotf, anyways, when you have time, check out my story, and reveiw!
9/16/2009 c24 1Uniquely Proud
Haii!
Oh my God, this story is amazing.
Totally love the characters.
You're brilliant!
1Uniquely ProudHaii!
Oh my God, this story is amazing.
Totally love the characters.
You're brilliant!
9/2/2009 c1 QuickSilverSand
this is the best story i've evr read on fictionpress! i love Cole and Charlie! i never liked Joss...i'm so glad Cole got his happy ending...and i loved Noah's story too...he is so cute with Addie and Sybil! but Cole takes the cake...he is all around sweetheart!
this is the best story i've evr read on fictionpress! i love Cole and Charlie! i never liked Joss...i'm so glad Cole got his happy ending...and i loved Noah's story too...he is so cute with Addie and Sybil! but Cole takes the cake...he is all around sweetheart!
8/26/2009 c16 LocalYokel
Hahaha that squirrel bit was really funny! 'let's go before it starts taking notes' - clever penny :)
Hahaha that squirrel bit was really funny! 'let's go before it starts taking notes' - clever penny :)
8/21/2009 c24 Hyperbole23
First off, let me just tell you that this is an AMAZING story! I loved Sleeping With the Enemy, though I wanted Joss to end up with Cole, but now i'm glad she didn't, cause Charlie is so much better with him. I ADORE this story, it's one of the best I've read on this site, and that says something!
Also, I hope you do write a story about Mel. I loved her from the start, when she was a little girl with cancer, and frankly, I just would die for a continuation of Sleeping With the Enemy and Rough Petals.
Amazing Work!
Please Write a Sequel!
~onesongglory23~
First off, let me just tell you that this is an AMAZING story! I loved Sleeping With the Enemy, though I wanted Joss to end up with Cole, but now i'm glad she didn't, cause Charlie is so much better with him. I ADORE this story, it's one of the best I've read on this site, and that says something!
Also, I hope you do write a story about Mel. I loved her from the start, when she was a little girl with cancer, and frankly, I just would die for a continuation of Sleeping With the Enemy and Rough Petals.
Amazing Work!
Please Write a Sequel!
~onesongglory23~
8/18/2009 c23 alwaysautumn
Aw.
That ending just fit so well with all of your characters ;)
I was so upset when Cole was all alone when 'Sleeping with the Enemy' finished. That story just felt so incomplete. Gosh. This story was also a bit of an emotional roller coaster, eh?
It's quite realistic in the way you portrayed Cole's and Charlie's relarionship. Their personalities do tend to clash, but it was never anything they couldn't work out :)
Good work.
x reeka
Aw.
That ending just fit so well with all of your characters ;)
I was so upset when Cole was all alone when 'Sleeping with the Enemy' finished. That story just felt so incomplete. Gosh. This story was also a bit of an emotional roller coaster, eh?
It's quite realistic in the way you portrayed Cole's and Charlie's relarionship. Their personalities do tend to clash, but it was never anything they couldn't work out :)
Good work.
x reeka