for Rough Petals5/27/2009 c16 namegame
I really like your story so far (though I haven't read the one that comes before it). Thanks so much for sharing it! One small issue: seven minutes of pushing is pretty much impossibly short for delivering a baby. Labor usually lasts hours, and post-transition labor (the pushing part) can be several hours as well. Other than that, though, nice job!
I really like your story so far (though I haven't read the one that comes before it). Thanks so much for sharing it! One small issue: seven minutes of pushing is pretty much impossibly short for delivering a baby. Labor usually lasts hours, and post-transition labor (the pushing part) can be several hours as well. Other than that, though, nice job!
5/26/2009 c24 
7Liya Smith
okay. im getting a little tired of the best friend cliche, and even though with you as the author, the summary itself might make people move away. i think the rabbit hole story sounds ten times better just because its gonna be action-y and cool and stuff. sweet.
by the way, i was surprised this story was even up, because i read SWTE a couple months ago, and then i came to your profile like yesterday to see the sequel was done. great day, great day. anyway, yeah. awesome shite right here.
7Liya Smithokay. im getting a little tired of the best friend cliche, and even though with you as the author, the summary itself might make people move away. i think the rabbit hole story sounds ten times better just because its gonna be action-y and cool and stuff. sweet.
by the way, i was surprised this story was even up, because i read SWTE a couple months ago, and then i came to your profile like yesterday to see the sequel was done. great day, great day. anyway, yeah. awesome shite right here.
5/26/2009 c23 Liya Smith
EEP! I LIVE IN NEW JERSEY! i dunno. reading that part made my heart thump really hard. anyway, i loved this story. don't be surprised if i message you with a banner for this story! :)
EEP! I LIVE IN NEW JERSEY! i dunno. reading that part made my heart thump really hard. anyway, i loved this story. don't be surprised if i message you with a banner for this story! :)
5/25/2009 c16 holly
its amazing how you can create such a good idea for a story and then fuck the whole thing up. TWICE!
why the hell did you bring joss back. you need to learn how to let your characters go.
I don't think I can read anymore of this. your writing is complete shit.
its amazing how you can create such a good idea for a story and then fuck the whole thing up. TWICE!
why the hell did you bring joss back. you need to learn how to let your characters go.
I don't think I can read anymore of this. your writing is complete shit.
5/23/2009 c24 1watergirl795
They're going to get married. They said they weren't, but I'm gonna imagine they do eventually. So yeah.
I'm so in love with this story, it's not even funny. Really, you're an amazing author and your stories are freakin' awesome!
Good job...and I'm sad too. No more Charlie and Cole...it's a sad, sad day.
But I loved it, and was absolutely thrilled at the way everything turned out! Thank you!
1watergirl795They're going to get married. They said they weren't, but I'm gonna imagine they do eventually. So yeah.
I'm so in love with this story, it's not even funny. Really, you're an amazing author and your stories are freakin' awesome!
Good job...and I'm sad too. No more Charlie and Cole...it's a sad, sad day.
But I loved it, and was absolutely thrilled at the way everything turned out! Thank you!
5/23/2009 c24 6sooner or later its over
Rough Petals was SO amazing and def. one of the best stories i have ever read :)
6sooner or later its overRough Petals was SO amazing and def. one of the best stories i have ever read :)
5/21/2009 c24 XxvampirebloodxX
aw... i really thought you would make another s.w.t.e :D but your not that evil! :D just kidding! thanks for the awesome story! and i hope you make another story! P.S i prefer the rabbit hole :D xoxo
aw... i really thought you would make another s.w.t.e :D but your not that evil! :D just kidding! thanks for the awesome story! and i hope you make another story! P.S i prefer the rabbit hole :D xoxo
5/21/2009 c24 2Popcornluver
Omg I loved this story with a passion thanks for writig it it was awesome tearss I'm gonna miss reading it
2PopcornluverOmg I loved this story with a passion thanks for writig it it was awesome tearss I'm gonna miss reading it
5/21/2009 c19 Spazz-O-Spades
My weird story? You know the pic Cole drew of Joss in the Chinese resturant? I SWEAR it's hanging in the Jade Garden where I live o_o Which is weird because I live like a zillion miles from New York, let alone NYC...
~Miki
My weird story? You know the pic Cole drew of Joss in the Chinese resturant? I SWEAR it's hanging in the Jade Garden where I live o_o Which is weird because I live like a zillion miles from New York, let alone NYC...
~Miki
5/21/2009 c24 Allie92
I loved this story and now im so sad its over , yoyu did such a good job with the both of them so I really hope you will do a Melody story one day . x
I loved this story and now im so sad its over , yoyu did such a good job with the both of them so I really hope you will do a Melody story one day . x
5/21/2009 c24 Evanescent.Sight
Its over! I'm definately adding this story to my favourites list :D
"The Rabbit Hole", definately. No matter how many plot twist's you use a best friend story will always be the same. The difference is only in the writing and considering your ok at that im not adverse to reading "C'est la Vie" if thats what you chose.
Its over! I'm definately adding this story to my favourites list :D
"The Rabbit Hole", definately. No matter how many plot twist's you use a best friend story will always be the same. The difference is only in the writing and considering your ok at that im not adverse to reading "C'est la Vie" if thats what you chose.
5/21/2009 c24 D-Mish
This was the perfect ending. Seriously, they didn't even get married :P
And I recon that i'd rather read 'The Rabbit Hole'
This was the perfect ending. Seriously, they didn't even get married :P
And I recon that i'd rather read 'The Rabbit Hole'
5/20/2009 c3 87Xara Nahara Campinelli
This chapter is just lolz. I love how Cole always gets stuck doing all kinds of nice things for women and gets the brunt of everyone's problems. I noticed that he is actually a lot nicer in this story than he was in the last. I wonder what accounts for that. Great job, once again.
87Xara Nahara CampinelliThis chapter is just lolz. I love how Cole always gets stuck doing all kinds of nice things for women and gets the brunt of everyone's problems. I noticed that he is actually a lot nicer in this story than he was in the last. I wonder what accounts for that. Great job, once again.