for Rough Petals5/9/2009 c20 DOLCEVITA
Breaks my heart reading this!
But I love it! Love your fillers! I too dread the day when this all comes to an end, I hope you come up with more and more and more ideas!
My goodness, it broke my heart when Charlie spilled everything to Noah.
More of this! I love it. Thanks for the wonderful updates! Can't get enough of this story and the characters!
Breaks my heart reading this!
But I love it! Love your fillers! I too dread the day when this all comes to an end, I hope you come up with more and more and more ideas!
My goodness, it broke my heart when Charlie spilled everything to Noah.
More of this! I love it. Thanks for the wonderful updates! Can't get enough of this story and the characters!
5/9/2009 c20 
1Trench Coats Suck
Hey
Loved this chapter well written but it was also breaking my heart please update asap I NEED A HAPPY MOMENT LOL
1Trench Coats SuckHey
Loved this chapter well written but it was also breaking my heart please update asap I NEED A HAPPY MOMENT LOL
5/8/2009 c19 2priscus-aoife
Poor charlie!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
very cool story about the balancing rocks too :P
2priscus-aoifePoor charlie!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
very cool story about the balancing rocks too :P
5/7/2009 c19 xoxhp
HOLY COW! I say that A LOT I know, but this chapter is all I can describe it with. WTF, do you not realize how long I have waited to hear that? To hear COLE find out about her past. Don't take this the wrong way, I'm i nlove with the two of them but sometimes, I feel like you need to know about stuff this important before you can move on to the next relationship because .. like this story, what happens when you're deep in & then they found. Idk, I probably sound NUTS but I'm so happy that you inlcuded it. FINALY! The cat has been let out of the bagg :) I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS CHAPTER AS MUCH AS IT MADE ME UPSET. Thanks so much! I cannot WAIT for the next one - you have to make it SOON!
HOLY COW! I say that A LOT I know, but this chapter is all I can describe it with. WTF, do you not realize how long I have waited to hear that? To hear COLE find out about her past. Don't take this the wrong way, I'm i nlove with the two of them but sometimes, I feel like you need to know about stuff this important before you can move on to the next relationship because .. like this story, what happens when you're deep in & then they found. Idk, I probably sound NUTS but I'm so happy that you inlcuded it. FINALY! The cat has been let out of the bagg :) I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS CHAPTER AS MUCH AS IT MADE ME UPSET. Thanks so much! I cannot WAIT for the next one - you have to make it SOON!
5/5/2009 c19 6sooner or later its over
thats such a cool story! so jealous nothing neat ever happens to me. :(
very excellent chapter
6sooner or later its overthats such a cool story! so jealous nothing neat ever happens to me. :(
very excellent chapter
5/5/2009 c19 5Not Mary Jane
you are killing me here. lol
i can totally sense that soon there'll be something wrong with Charlie and Cole, since they are too lovey dovey together.
and then... BAM, that stupid Vince dude appeared at the end.
Not a really good chapter to read before going to bed.
Update soon!
5Not Mary Janeyou are killing me here. lol
i can totally sense that soon there'll be something wrong with Charlie and Cole, since they are too lovey dovey together.
and then... BAM, that stupid Vince dude appeared at the end.
Not a really good chapter to read before going to bed.
Update soon!
5/5/2009 c19 XxButterflyxAngelxBabygirl
oh my gosh. i can't believe Cole did that after the onion! that was hilarious! i wonder what will happen now that he's figured out what Charlie was doing. that is a really early update- 1:52 am. wow. loved the chapter! hope you can get the chance to continue again soon! how many chapters will there be in this story?
oh my gosh. i can't believe Cole did that after the onion! that was hilarious! i wonder what will happen now that he's figured out what Charlie was doing. that is a really early update- 1:52 am. wow. loved the chapter! hope you can get the chance to continue again soon! how many chapters will there be in this story?
5/5/2009 c19 1Kimberlli
Ohh.. that's badd. Really bad. I could've cried but I'm on messenger witha friend who's just hilarious and well feeling bad for cole, charlie, laughing with rodolfo and trying to hate vince really don't work together.
Ok so a story.. well the only one that comes to my mind happened this year. See I've got a friend, who's got a crush on a boy (who's not bad looking, i'll admit it) that goes home in the same school bus that she does (her dad drives it) and this year, I got the same classroom as him, but he's just one of those people who just can't stop talking in class and it looks as if they were studying to be circus clown, adn well, I'll admit it, I'm a bit of a nerd/geek/dork or whatever you'd liek to call it, whe it comes to school. Anyways, there's this day that he goes and sits in the chair next to mine and when I notice it I just make this horrible noise as If I've seen somting horrible (it wasn't intentional i swear) and then he looks at me like I'm crazy and I go 'Oops sorry, I thought I saw a bugg over there' and i pointed to the bck of the cahir and he made an understanding noise and went back to what he was doing. And ever sicne he's been treating me like I'm one of his best buddies. So I know, not relevant at all, but I wanted to share something here! =)
SO great chapter, update soon, Kim's got to go finish homework! Bye! =D
1KimberlliOhh.. that's badd. Really bad. I could've cried but I'm on messenger witha friend who's just hilarious and well feeling bad for cole, charlie, laughing with rodolfo and trying to hate vince really don't work together.
Ok so a story.. well the only one that comes to my mind happened this year. See I've got a friend, who's got a crush on a boy (who's not bad looking, i'll admit it) that goes home in the same school bus that she does (her dad drives it) and this year, I got the same classroom as him, but he's just one of those people who just can't stop talking in class and it looks as if they were studying to be circus clown, adn well, I'll admit it, I'm a bit of a nerd/geek/dork or whatever you'd liek to call it, whe it comes to school. Anyways, there's this day that he goes and sits in the chair next to mine and when I notice it I just make this horrible noise as If I've seen somting horrible (it wasn't intentional i swear) and then he looks at me like I'm crazy and I go 'Oops sorry, I thought I saw a bugg over there' and i pointed to the bck of the cahir and he made an understanding noise and went back to what he was doing. And ever sicne he's been treating me like I'm one of his best buddies. So I know, not relevant at all, but I wanted to share something here! =)
SO great chapter, update soon, Kim's got to go finish homework! Bye! =D
5/5/2009 c19 1 800 vampire
i so cannot believe what cole did to her!
i am kinda angry with him, but i still really like him. Damn vince and cole for not letter her explain.
damn them...
funny stories... ... i was walking today and the guy i totally like (who has a gf) and i were flirting nonstop and i walking into a tree in the sidewalk cuz i was laughing so hard. he scootered (yes, he and many others in our grades still have scooters) into a wall of a dry cleaners:D
i so cannot believe what cole did to her!
i am kinda angry with him, but i still really like him. Damn vince and cole for not letter her explain.
damn them...
funny stories... ... i was walking today and the guy i totally like (who has a gf) and i were flirting nonstop and i walking into a tree in the sidewalk cuz i was laughing so hard. he scootered (yes, he and many others in our grades still have scooters) into a wall of a dry cleaners:D
5/5/2009 c19 3Has A WaywithWords
Loved the chapter... until Vince came back into the picture. I'll tell you I almost fainted, literally. I feel bad for Charlie, but I still think she should have told Cole about her 'dirty little secret'. But then again, Cole really shouldn't have been so positive about her not loving him! Any BLIND person could see that she was head over heels for him. Update SOON!
3Has A WaywithWordsLoved the chapter... until Vince came back into the picture. I'll tell you I almost fainted, literally. I feel bad for Charlie, but I still think she should have told Cole about her 'dirty little secret'. But then again, Cole really shouldn't have been so positive about her not loving him! Any BLIND person could see that she was head over heels for him. Update SOON!
5/5/2009 c19 notyourbiz
omg! I knew that something like this would happen eventually, but not like this! Its better to tell them before they find out and make it sound worse than it really is *sigh* Update soon!
omg! I knew that something like this would happen eventually, but not like this! Its better to tell them before they find out and make it sound worse than it really is *sigh* Update soon!