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1/6/2009 c1 10Soul Skater 79
AWESOME, i love how very little happens in the story yet I'm sucked in (Please review my story)
1/2/2009 c1 28mikey magee
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I love your opening line, it presents a nice idea and on top of that it forshadows the story, and showcases the character. Very nice work!

* "towers ans spires" "ans" should be "and"

This was a nice quick read, it read well and the pacing was nice and descriptive without going overboard!

Keep writing!

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