for Manhattan Love Story6/17/2001 c14 
5GoldenEagle
Wow. That was really good. I want to know what happens! You pumped up the emotional drama big time. Great! Get the next part out soon!
5GoldenEagleWow. That was really good. I want to know what happens! You pumped up the emotional drama big time. Great! Get the next part out soon!
6/16/2001 c14 setsunna
::cries:: thats so good! I WANNA READ MORE! I love this story! JUST LOVE IT!
::cries:: thats so good! I WANNA READ MORE! I love this story! JUST LOVE IT!
6/13/2001 c13 Setsunna
NOOOO! I wanna know what happens! This is such a good story! Love it, hope you can get the next chapter out soon...or maybe all of them^.~
NOOOO! I wanna know what happens! This is such a good story! Love it, hope you can get the next chapter out soon...or maybe all of them^.~
6/11/2001 c13 3Nevyn
How was the door knob blooked if there was no one in the room? Are there two doors or what? Anyway, this is a very good chapter adn I am looking forward to the next one. Keep up the excelent writing and I hope that the story continues for some time.
3NevynHow was the door knob blooked if there was no one in the room? Are there two doors or what? Anyway, this is a very good chapter adn I am looking forward to the next one. Keep up the excelent writing and I hope that the story continues for some time.
6/10/2001 c13 angellyfish
i've read the whole thing so far and all i have to say is: AMAZING! u have really good use of words and metaphors. keep it up!
i've read the whole thing so far and all i have to say is: AMAZING! u have really good use of words and metaphors. keep it up!
5/30/2001 c13 Kristina6
Oh my god, I really love this story. It is soooo good! I can't wait till the next chapter, I hope it comes out soon!
Oh my god, I really love this story. It is soooo good! I can't wait till the next chapter, I hope it comes out soon!
5/29/2001 c13 Guest
okay. This is driving me crazy! I want to read the next pert so badly! Very good chapter as usual. Keep up the good work. I hope to read the next pert soon.
okay. This is driving me crazy! I want to read the next pert so badly! Very good chapter as usual. Keep up the good work. I hope to read the next pert soon.
5/29/2001 c13 GoldenEagle
Ecoli, all this foreshadowing is killing me! Get the next part out soon.
Ecoli, all this foreshadowing is killing me! Get the next part out soon.
5/27/2001 c12 no one
If this is the last chapter, I am going to scream! This was so good. you defently need to add more to it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. Oh, I hope this is not the end, I really, really do...
If this is the last chapter, I am going to scream! This was so good. you defently need to add more to it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. Oh, I hope this is not the end, I really, really do...
5/27/2001 c6 No one
That is so evil! How did Jake find out? Oh, this keeps getting better adn better. I think that they need locks on the lockers. Poor Anthony!
That is so evil! How did Jake find out? Oh, this keeps getting better adn better. I think that they need locks on the lockers. Poor Anthony!
5/26/2001 c5 No one
I am so confused! Was he not already involved with Ben in the first 3 chapters? Why are they going trough the whole "Hi, what is your name?" thing? Oh bother! Can someone please emaill me and tell me what is going on? Thank you.
I am so confused! Was he not already involved with Ben in the first 3 chapters? Why are they going trough the whole "Hi, what is your name?" thing? Oh bother! Can someone please emaill me and tell me what is going on? Thank you.
5/21/2001 c10 LAUR
cool subject, it's not used much.
cool subject, it's not used much.
5/20/2001 c11 L.E. Lamkin
Oh...My...God...Why do I seem to be saying that after almost EVERY chapter? Maybe because this is the best work ever? God, Savvy, this is awesome! You have so many doubts about this book and then I read this and I'm like, "Where does she come up with the idea that this SUCKS?". This chapter was awesome, hun. I just loved it! I mean, you feel so happy for Ben and Anthony. You just wanna see 'em cuddle! It's so sweet. And you've set it all up perfectly now. Now that they aren't in the safety of Ben's bedroom, the world doesn't seem so squeaky clean and happy anymore. Perfect! I'm betting there's gonna be some major drama soon...Keep it UP!
Oh...My...God...Why do I seem to be saying that after almost EVERY chapter? Maybe because this is the best work ever? God, Savvy, this is awesome! You have so many doubts about this book and then I read this and I'm like, "Where does she come up with the idea that this SUCKS?". This chapter was awesome, hun. I just loved it! I mean, you feel so happy for Ben and Anthony. You just wanna see 'em cuddle! It's so sweet. And you've set it all up perfectly now. Now that they aren't in the safety of Ben's bedroom, the world doesn't seem so squeaky clean and happy anymore. Perfect! I'm betting there's gonna be some major drama soon...Keep it UP!
5/19/2001 c11 allegra
*sniff* that was sooooooo good, as usual of course but...I love all the scenes with those two, I cannot get enough! What else can i say? I'm still trying to resurrect myself from the puddle of goo this chapter turned me into. So because this chapter was *sob* short, the next one will be looong and soon right? Either way, this is the best book EVER, you know that right! I can't wait to read the next chapter...
*sniff* that was sooooooo good, as usual of course but...I love all the scenes with those two, I cannot get enough! What else can i say? I'm still trying to resurrect myself from the puddle of goo this chapter turned me into. So because this chapter was *sob* short, the next one will be looong and soon right? Either way, this is the best book EVER, you know that right! I can't wait to read the next chapter...
5/17/2001 c10 L.E. Lamkin
This is quite possibly one of THE best books I've ever read in my entire life. The chapters get better and better as they are added. The characters are lovable, funny, smart, charming and I just swoon whenever I read scenes between the two main characters. This chapter was awesome, Sav. Keep up the excellent work! And you thought this chapter was crummy...
This is quite possibly one of THE best books I've ever read in my entire life. The chapters get better and better as they are added. The characters are lovable, funny, smart, charming and I just swoon whenever I read scenes between the two main characters. This chapter was awesome, Sav. Keep up the excellent work! And you thought this chapter was crummy...